Battles  OGDopeCoat vs CarpullFunnel

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • U see this girl, was my world, she whirl like a vortex, and was like the most shiny pearl
  • she was mouth droppin, with her booty poppin, could get a hole concert stoppin,
  • when i seen that i was done shoppin, i was in the room with her pantys droppin,
  • and she got on me and started dick hoppin, she was dick sloppin, the best whatchin
  • and when her booty was still boppin, so she took my heart, never fell apart,
  • thought we were sole mates we were love at start, not people that wanted a bag in the cart,
  • and if she did it would leave a mark, that would make my life go dark,
  • and would make me come back like a dog and bark, and make big money like tony starks,
  • but it didnt come down to that, arguing and actin like ur on prozack, sayin facts,
  • of the past i thought she like me cause i had stacks, but she was in love thats not whack,
  • she was the best and kept me on track, see she was the thing to mention, worth anyone pention,
  • if she was mad it was like detention, but was about love not defliction, but we did show infliction,
  • convention, nothin to cause tension, so why wont u listen, she was the best,
  • a diamond not less, nothin close to a mess, but her smile was a bless,
  • she was a bit of a test, but i can confess, there was stress,
  • alot of drug abuse the police had to arrest,
  • somthin we did was quit that bettered our guest, so were not a guess,
  • of somthin demonic leading to death, we were tryin to be nothin close to a threat,
  • maybe our lives will never end from debt,and maybee w will be forever and nothin less.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Yo bro check it out I read your love story,
  • But I re-read itagain and thought it was quite boring,
  • I was snoring, even though its pouring outside,
  • I bet you cried more when your girl told you she lied.
  • Damn at least she was being real,
  • Popping a peele, no jordan or any of his NBA threes,
  • You'd probably dream of a three-way of him, your girl, and you down on your knees,
  • Now I'll follow the rules and start my story so you don't squeal.
  • Reporting and flaging me like a boat parking in the dock,
  • Theres many fish in the the sea but I dont want the one sucking on your rock,
  • Hardball let's play this game which made your girl came,
  • A front row seat for you but you'll still think its lame,
  • I've repeated the same rhymes, but not the same lines,
  • I've made multiple raps without even trying,
  • But who's gonna listen to them if I ain't even placed my buy in,
  • The sixteenth time you called your girl, you came out like Harbaw, crying,
  • Denying your loss, the superbowls not a ceramic piece, pay the cost,
  • Or else you'll be the seahawks in the sky with a diamond,
  • Luckily Lucy didn't fly ass high as your ego rhymin',
  • This ain't no battle you just copied your sob story, with perpendicular timing.

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