Battles  luketheundead vs YellowTape

RULES

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THIS BATTLE IS OVER

luketheundead won this battle!

CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • This guy is filled with malice
  • Dripping word salads, causing a ballad
  • Keep them to yourself young lad
  • They all trash, indecisive and brash
  • Wanna make me take out my car and crash
  • Raps sounding like you were off crack
  • So terrible but your names not Ivan
  • Therefore that means it’s the bars that aren’t vibin
  • Why are you tryin? Stick to another piece of writing
  • You make my eyes want to start dyin
  • This the truth, get used to it fool
  • You a tool, not a sharp one too
  • Haha, you belong In literacy school
  • Cuz these bars you drop don’t represent you as cruel
  • Just a big fool tryna make his image prove
  • That he’s the best guy and the truth
  • Man shut up, and take a deep breath
  • Get some pep in your step and watch me step by step
  • On how to write tracks that would never be caressed
  • You damn punk fool

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