Battles  ID vs Nautious

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I never grew up in poverty or tragedy
  • But in a reality
  • full of royalty and principalities
  • or at least
  • that's what people see of me
  • there's a low possibility
  • for me
  • to be seen as a casualty, casually
  • strolling by
  • until I'm stopped by
  • a person asking when and why
  • so by surprise
  • I answer without coming close to that border line
  • so I entertain my mind
  • by thinking about becoming a millionaire
  • without using life lines
  • Sometimes
  • I make a beat to keep track
  • of those who attacck me
  • in parts where I'm lacking
  • Quite Frankly
  • I couldn't careless about the things you say of me
  • "i" may be in the center of society
  • but it doesn't revolve around me

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I heard this story through Facebook of a little girl preaching
  • How many people she didn't know she'd be teaching
  • She told her story of her mom and dad out to them she was reaching
  • For their attention and also seeking
  • To change the mind set of the youth with their screeching
  • Her life made me wonder why she hadn't began to reach for the breeching
  • That's when she explained that her siblings were her saviors
  • Got me thinking how this world doesn't grant many favors
  • Yet we're expected to love neighbors and strangers
  • When the love we receive comes not from our mothers
  • Or from our fathers but our brother
  • And sisters but most the time not even from our lovers
  • Then we're expected to not put up walls like covers
  • But break them down like old wooden shutters
  • Then there are some who complain about life
  • Even those who are married with a husband or a wife
  • Some talk about reaching for the knife
  • Though with their family they have had no strife
  • That's why now a days suicide has become rife
  • Because we learn from day one
  • That we are brought up in a world with none
  • Truthfully even most have more than some
  • But some almost never beat one to the gun

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