Battles  EClipz vs pot420

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I'm starting out as a amateur, I ain't on Santa's good list,
  • An' that stairway to heaven, I'm hanging off of the banister,
  • I choose a life a' art, I don't wanna be a gangsta,
  • Try and martyr myself for a couple grams and manage the,
  • Pain and disdain man has got for my name,
  • I try to do good, but what is good to a chain?
  • Materialistic youth, this our generation,
  • So aloof to the fact that our vanity is plaguing,
  • Our ways an', all that money we scraped to save an',
  • Our personality, coz' them new J's just another phase,
  • Updated the craze, outdated in a couple a' days,
  • Your ideas are burnt out like an ashtray,
  • May I ask if I may, betray society and defy it's,
  • Bullshit tenants and pray, that my priorities aren't played,
  • Like a game of monopoly, caught in the monotony,
  • Of a neverending lease that begins to never seize,
  • Please God accept my plea, to see and not be deceived,
  • That for my family tree, light and water is received,
  • I know plenty well, I ain't done good deeds,
  • But what worth are laws if you don't got thieves,
  • That feed, off a' society and lead authority onto they knees,
  • Feel the breeze that rushes past as they let the lead release,
  • Next one hits your head fast and then sets your mind at ease,
  • I don't care how pretty your please is, my decline an ugly nigga,
  • Put you on your knees, leave you deceased, when he pull that trigger,
  • No one will identify you, one adjective to describe you,
  • Disfigured figure with lips more swollen than Jigga's,
  • Ha, I'm sorry it ended this way, this ain't no game you can play,
  • You were gifted with a crop of talent, but when you lose it,
  • Good luck not getting stabbed by the needle in the hay,
  • I got little else to say, your brittle rhymes ain't straight,
  • I leave you with something to study, don't procrastinate.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • yo takin money out da stack
  • tryna buy that pound of pack
  • put it on yo bitches rack
  • yeah we getting hella smacked
  • gonna hit from the back
  • watch the bitch go wack
  •  
  • yeah ayyy
  •  
  • now we coming back
  • yeah we sellin crack
  • da shits givin heart attacks
  • but aint cuttin any slack
  • makin my gun go click clack
  • then gonna make yo head crack
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  • ayyyyyyy
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  • this shit got you trippin
  • you attached you aint flippin
  • got these bitches drippin
  • ima go ahead start sippin
  • goin out back we goin dippin
  • next thing i know the bitch strippin
  • let her hit the blunt she start trippin
  • man but i aint commitin
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  • Now im going hard
  • gonna scrap you in da yard
  • then take dat man card
  • ima be your lord
  • you not gonna score
  • ill hit you so hard you gonna soar
  • then you can call me thor
  • i dare you to come back for more

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