Battles  DKB vs Kerum2

RULES

Write about a struggle you have day in and day out

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Gotta devotion to something,that might not get off the ground
  • But i gotta try,never know what could become
  • Might be set to blow,like a slugger from a gun
  • Might be destined to be #1
  • Bound to greatness,you could say
  • Or could spend 7 years,and never see pay
  • But no grey hairs,bro i don't stress
  • Cause i'd rather be working to be the best
  • But now that I'm back in the swing of things
  • I wanna try to get some fame,and see it everything it has to bring
  • Even though trying to write perfection is a struggle,i try to make myself look humble
  • I just wanna be able to give this rap thing a chance
  • And maybe just maybe i'll get some fans
  • Have a small following,to get me some limelight
  • I'd be fine with a small following,yeah that would be alright
  • Sometimes i stay up all night,even into daylight trying to finish up some rhymes
  • Up a ladder of popularity,i'll try to climb whether it be in rap or amongst my friends
  • I don't know why,but at this very moment in time i feel at my prime
  • I don't wanna sound cocky about my rapping skills
  • Cause i know I'm not the best at this,but i wanna be
  • But i know my myself i will not turn out to be the king
  • Or become some kind of rap champion
  • I just hope that i'll have some listeners that'll be chanting on
  • It would just be cool to turn this little hobby into a job
  • It may seem confusing what i really want
  • Probably cause I'm not that sure myself
  • But I just you guys to give a little help

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Mr. Bully please can you not
  • I can't take anymore
  • Won't you please stop
  • While you were in the bathroom smoking on your pot
  • Choking on the dope, the narcotics you bought
  • I was studying for my class
  • Making sure that I pass
  • You didn't care about my future
  • To you I'm just a kid you wanna torture
  • So I ask you Mr. Bully
  • Why do you do this?
  • When do you think I'm going to break?
  • I'm defenseless and innocent
  • You're remorseless and irrelevant
  • Eventually your strength will fail
  • You'll lose, probably end up in jail
  • I'll rise to the top
  • Go on to make millions
  • Challenged only by God
  • But I'll remember the day
  • The time you abused me
  • The names you called me; Hey Faggot you're Gay!
  • You shut me away
  • Made me who I am
  • Made who I am not
  • So Mr. Bully I say
  • Someday... I hope you rot

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