Battles commelafin vs SlickRiver
RULES
Speak the truth
Max of 28 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Machiavellian
- Rappers acting like barbarians
- Glorifying gangbanging with no variance
- Money being the key and all they rap about is wealthiness
- Consequences of the scariness that comes from the crimes
- Are not cared for much, if it were me I would be scared for such
- Demeanor, I consider jail a failure,
- Dreams that are crushed by bad actions, manners and behaviors
- So I'm gonna be unconventional but honest in my behavior
- By telling all the children that aggression ain't the way to be the player
- Get some education, (maybe a major) delay your drugs and hallucinations
- Build yourself a good reputation using useful information
- Modern day civilization in America shows that one in ten black men
- Go to jail for drugs, and most of the 'em don't change the way they see through their retina
- Just dimwits tryna make a buck, revelers that are too loud when fucking up
- "Lost my family, and all my money. Fuck sake! And that truck that I used to smuggle
- Dope and coke in through the market, I wish I saw in the first place..."
- I'm gonna teach you to mark it as a bad thing to do, and maybe you'll embrace
- The idea that you can make money from rapping lines with a beat on stage
- As long as you can tell the truth, with grace
- I would get pissed If you decided to choose to rap about bitches and that swoosh
- On your nike shoes, Jordans too
- With your words try to change the rap anatomy and thesis
- Enforce your change on the world and be the liveliest when you speak it
- Playing with fire and rhythms, rhymes and cheeriness mixed with deep shit
- Change the way you flow, 'cause the way you spit should be fucking genius
DEFENDER'S RAP
- I'm about to unwind all of the unkind shit in my mind
- You will want to resign cuz me and myself when combined
- Are designed to blind, and leave you behind
- Crying in the dirt wishin your shit was as good as mine
- Cuz Slick is undefined, blowin up these lines with these rhymes
- I'm ill timed, well timed you can kiss my hind
- Come and praise me at the SlickRivers Shrine
- I don't need dollar signs I just need these lines
- Killin all these rappers dement, and intertwine
- My shit has flow, and my shit is cool
- You should that I'll make you drool
- And your shit is old you look like a fool
- Rappin against me you must be a tool
- Your vision must be hazy, cuz it takes somebody crazy to battle this
- And I guess your not lazy and I see the bravery you comin to battle slick
- I will start rattlin and spittin the minister shit
- that will stick in your head like brick hits a dick
- My tempo is quick, burning you like a wick, i'm so ill I make you sick
- You wishin you never had to witness this
- Tappin your bitch is a topic I often see listed
- Just listen this isn't christian i'm on a mission
- To be the best without an audition
- In addition my ambition created my condition
- It was your decision to collide in this collision
- Words are my ammunition my mouth is my transmition
- Transmittin these prohibited superstitions
- My precision gives incisions like educated technicians