Battles  commelafin vs SlickRiver

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Speak the truth

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Machiavellian
  • Rappers acting like barbarians
  • Glorifying gangbanging with no variance
  • Money being the key and all they rap about is wealthiness
  • Consequences of the scariness that comes from the crimes
  • Are not cared for much, if it were me I would be scared for such
  • Demeanor, I consider jail a failure,
  • Dreams that are crushed by bad actions, manners and behaviors
  • So I'm gonna be unconventional but honest in my behavior
  • By telling all the children that aggression ain't the way to be the player
  • Get some education, (maybe a major) delay your drugs and hallucinations
  • Build yourself a good reputation using useful information
  • Modern day civilization in America shows that one in ten black men
  • Go to jail for drugs, and most of the 'em don't change the way they see through their retina
  • Just dimwits tryna make a buck, revelers that are too loud when fucking up
  • "Lost my family, and all my money. Fuck sake! And that truck that I used to smuggle
  • Dope and coke in through the market, I wish I saw in the first place..."
  • I'm gonna teach you to mark it as a bad thing to do, and maybe you'll embrace
  • The idea that you can make money from rapping lines with a beat on stage
  • As long as you can tell the truth, with grace
  • I would get pissed If you decided to choose to rap about bitches and that swoosh
  • On your nike shoes, Jordans too
  • With your words try to change the rap anatomy and thesis
  • Enforce your change on the world and be the liveliest when you speak it
  • Playing with fire and rhythms, rhymes and cheeriness mixed with deep shit
  • Change the way you flow, 'cause the way you spit should be fucking genius

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I'm about to unwind all of the unkind shit in my mind
  • You will want to resign cuz me and myself when combined
  • Are designed to blind, and leave you behind
  • Crying in the dirt wishin your shit was as good as mine
  • Cuz Slick is undefined, blowin up these lines with these rhymes
  • I'm ill timed, well timed you can kiss my hind
  • Come and praise me at the SlickRivers Shrine
  • I don't need dollar signs I just need these lines
  • Killin all these rappers dement, and intertwine
  • My shit has flow, and my shit is cool
  • You should that I'll make you drool
  • And your shit is old you look like a fool
  • Rappin against me you must be a tool
  • Your vision must be hazy, cuz it takes somebody crazy to battle this
  • And I guess your not lazy and I see the bravery you comin to battle slick
  • I will start rattlin and spittin the minister shit
  • that will stick in your head like brick hits a dick
  • My tempo is quick, burning you like a wick, i'm so ill I make you sick
  • You wishin you never had to witness this
  • Tappin your bitch is a topic I often see listed
  • Just listen this isn't christian i'm on a mission
  • To be the best without an audition
  • In addition my ambition created my condition
  • It was your decision to collide in this collision
  • Words are my ammunition my mouth is my transmition
  • Transmittin these prohibited superstitions
  • My precision gives incisions like educated technicians
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