Battles  Beyonder vs CarlCee

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THIS BATTLE IS OVER

CarlCee won this battle!

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Battle on December 5 2014

CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • with my black hair, my brown eyes, and white skin,
  • loved playing around, but never got thin/
  • running around I lost a few pounds,
  • I grew up with a couple of fond memories/
  • some of them heckled me, when I get nostalgic,
  • I'm treasuring a dead relic, I couldn't sell it/
  • time to man up, get my plan up, not willing but I gots to attack dawg,
  • not letting this go, because who ever said yo,
  • you aren't blessed from the getgo, your spirits is the ghetto/
  • the projection of your reality, you live through casually,
  • let just say, manually you can't handle me,
  • please let me establish thee, in the things you haven't seen,
  • an author with authority but very keen,
  • I'll be prejudice like paula deen, the things in my life I have seen,
  • a martian martyr bowing to the same Father/
  • Fell to an addiction that ruined a live mission, put my own will in a submission,
  • my vision, the friction, of my spiritual collision/
  • when you know better do better, I'm talking mind over matter,
  • loved ones over cheddar, live passes by once, get her!
  • Because when you're in the dark, love is the sun, matter a spark,
  • I'm trying super hard like clark, the villainous Kent lose to the dark side,
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  • the villainous Kent lost to the darkseid...
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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Coming to the earth I was born lyrically insane //
  • Bitches coming to mirth end up criminally slain//
  • Walking outta here carried on a hearse for I'm hysterically inflame//
  • God of evilness, Me and the devil are typically the same//
  • For fucking with me you'll walk outta here Physically enceinte//
  • Call me king of rappad Cause i've been killing slum fags,
  • tricking dump traps, winning hon laps every-time i start spitting some raps
  • ain't giving fun facts, i'll leave you admitting your lapse and i'll be kicking your ass//
  • after years in rapping you got 0 progress, you think you're a god ? you think you're complex
  • homey you're spitting garbage it's nonsense//
  • you got baby mind and your pratty insane get the fuck outta rappad or step up your game

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