Battles CrackerJ vs RMX
RULES
No cursing
Max of 32 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- You see me walk through the halls with a gun in my left hand.
- I've chose this path and it's the one I now must take.
- You here a bang and a snap with a hiss and a roar.
- Then I shoot him down and the crowd starts to roar.
- The cops find me and they ask what I've seen.
- Then I say I have seen a man just loose a spleen.
- And I shot the murderer down.
- They take me away and I here them say,
- they don't believe one word I've said.
- So I guess this is it.
- Goodbye, here I go to a life in prison I guess.
- My life has now turned into some twisted mess.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- with this bleek boring story/rap you're boring people away,
- it's actually really better if the cop's lock u away,
- c's none of us want's to hear or read what stupid metaphors you say
- i mean it's so predictable ,to be honest i dint even read thru your whole rap,
- the second line itself, showed your personality i.e CRAP,
- it would be applicable for u to take a few lesson's on wrtting proper lines,
- c's a maggot like you don't deserve to speak/write about rap.