Battles  PoetSapphireFR vs OddOnezOut

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • I'm low-rated and not foreseen to be at the top.
  • Call me flop, use your glock, and make me your prop.
  • Life is difficult, call this an exaggeration.
  • I'm pummeled to the ground, unfit to be in this generation
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  • As you can see, I've been suffering at the start.
  • Attempts to diss and to comfort, all these raps I'll discard.
  • Preschool-style rhyme schemes and the beat drops don't fit.
  • Steering from a resolution, bad chords played like a bullet.
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  • Going hard on myself, because I've never done this before.
  • Been' receiving big L's, put my skill on the floor.
  • Let me drop, let me fall, humbled amateur poet.
  • Fail a lot, my downfall, don't deserve to be called it.
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  • I'll be expected as a loser, known to fail.
  • If there is even a future, this will be a fairytale.
  • Outnumbered in votes and outskilled in life.
  • At the bottom of all, how am I still alive?

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I get money then i’m gone that’s a hard pill to swallow
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  • Try to start a rap off without crap about how good you flow.
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  • That bastard was buzzing like woody so we get it for free
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  • This story's about good days of glory,we don't even worry
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  • And that will average out to about one good hour's sleep
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  • My father's dead, well i don't know, we'll never fucking meet
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  • Relying on myself
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  • Wish i could shed all these tears
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  • It's good, i'm about to steal your soul
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  • 18 year sentence with no parole
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  • Cum again, invite 'em if you have any fun friends
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  • Im feeling so lonely only myself
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  • Good morning, good raps, good morrow, good luck

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