Battles CarlCee vs BC
RULES
write about pain, you might use a prewritten rap if you want good luck :)
Max of 21 lines
THIS BATTLE IS OVER
CarlCee won this battle!
3 ROUNDS
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Battle on November 10 2014 and Battle on November 13 2014
CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Living everyday where pain is the credo
- whizzing like a prey diving inside a tornado
- wishing for the day, i can see the rainbow
- tripping in my way for i became a draco
- so i'm skipping that play, leaving with a halo
- digging a way for life became a fuken volcano
- driven troubles, now i'm suffering from lumbago
- fuck u life, you're no longer cato
- just leave me alone and #sago
- i'm no longer diego,#life just #let #me #go
- #hook
- in this life i'm going mad i'm going insane
- i can't be you, you can't be me but we're feeling the same pain
- i see pages of my life running, i see more pain coming, so i'm closing #the #door
- and shutting// ya i'm closing #the #door and shutting
- #verse 2
- i wonder if pain was my #origin i can't live without it it became my #oxygen
- now i'm abouta get mad days chasing my tears sitting in a corner sad ma life sucks
- but instead of going to my room crying days and nights
- i began rapping about life, hopping to survive
- #hook.............
DEFENDER'S RAP
- have you ever felt a stinging sensation
- like joy for you was some sort of dispensation
- have you ever felt the tightness around your head
- a strenuous band around your mind that you have fed
- as the disease spreads through your structure
- you feel as though your lungs will rupture
- and if only you could take the sting away
- o you know what i would pay
- feel the tightness griping your throat
- as your mind starts to go afloat
- but it's not just me that feels this anguish
- everyone hurts i suppose I'm pretty childish
- but know that I'm bein sincere
- everyone has there own pain don't you find that queer
- some is physical others is mental even spiritual
- to completely get ride of pain id take a miracle
- so i guess we'll have to hold on to throbs and aches
- I'm trying to be sly, can you hear my voice quake