Battles  CarlCee vs BC

RULES

write about pain, you might use a prewritten rap if you want good luck :)

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THIS BATTLE IS OVER

CarlCee won this battle!

CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Living everyday where pain is the credo
  • whizzing like a prey diving inside a tornado
  • wishing for the day, i can see the rainbow
  • tripping in my way for i became a draco
  • so i'm skipping that play, leaving with a halo
  • digging a way for life became a fuken volcano
  • driven troubles, now i'm suffering from lumbago
  • fuck u life, you're no longer cato
  • just leave me alone and #sago
  • i'm no longer diego,#life just #let #me #go
  • #hook
  • in this life i'm going mad i'm going insane
  • i can't be you, you can't be me but we're feeling the same pain
  • i see pages of my life running, i see more pain coming, so i'm closing #the #door
  • and shutting// ya i'm closing #the #door and shutting
  • #verse 2
  • i wonder if pain was my #origin i can't live without it it became my #oxygen
  • now i'm abouta get mad days chasing my tears sitting in a corner sad ma life sucks
  • but instead of going to my room crying days and nights
  • i began rapping about life, hopping to survive
  • #hook.............

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • have you ever felt a stinging sensation
  • like joy for you was some sort of dispensation
  • have you ever felt the tightness around your head
  • a strenuous band around your mind that you have fed
  • as the disease spreads through your structure
  • you feel as though your lungs will rupture
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  • and if only you could take the sting away
  • o you know what i would pay
  • feel the tightness griping your throat
  • as your mind starts to go afloat
  • but it's not just me that feels this anguish
  • everyone hurts i suppose I'm pretty childish
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  • but know that I'm bein sincere
  • everyone has there own pain don't you find that queer
  • some is physical others is mental even spiritual
  • to completely get ride of pain id take a miracle
  • so i guess we'll have to hold on to throbs and aches
  • I'm trying to be sly, can you hear my voice quake

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