Battles  ShiraNegative vs

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NO SWEARING Must promote pessimism and mock optimism.

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Intro
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  • Hey, it's me, the name's Shira
  • You keep tryin' to stay positive, but it's hard to find any cheer
  • The glass seems half empty, I'm a hardcore pessimist
  • You keep tellin' yourself everything will be alright, but I know it won't be
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  • Verse 1
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  • Hey, it's me, the name's Shira
  • Come on and frown, turn your smile upside down
  • The glass is half empty, I'm a pessimist, a realist
  • Life is pain, nobody else sees the world as mundane
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  • Verse 2
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  • Nobody gets my point, nobody understands
  • They stare at me like I'm Comic Sans
  • I'm used to that, but I want to know
  • Where in the world did all the pessimists go
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  • Chorus
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  • Everybody looks for a brighter tomorrow
  • But life keeps throwing punches, every day there's more sorrow
  • The clouds never part, no silver lining in sight
  • Tried to stay strong but you can't fight this fight
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  • Verse 3
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  • Hey, it's me, the name's Shira
  • I hate this trend of positivity
  • Do you really have to keep on smiling
  • Or is it your insane stupidity

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • When a white man gets shot the people are sad
  • When a black man gets shot the people say drug dealer
  • why cant a black man just be a man
  • Like he looks just like a white man with a fire tan
  • Man ****(frick) you crackers
  • Not all blacks are gangsters, some of us are just rappers
  • Like we out here scared fo' our life
  • We cant go out at night
  • Cus them pigs gonna say that we trouble
  • Like what the ****(heck) this is just incredible
  • I night i sit in my room as the sirens go by
  • Sometimes when i hear them i shake and cry
  • Cus a year ago those sirens killed my friend
  • It was the weekend, and it was night
  • We were do'in everything right
  • We weren't speeding or music to loud
  • When those sirens came on i wanted to shout

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