Battles  FuckLove vs Heeman

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Battle on January 21 2023

CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Can I still hear the silence when I’m asleep at night?
  • Do I notice everything when nothing is in sight?
  • In my dreams do I watch without ever really seeing?
  • Can love make me invisible to every other feeling?
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  • Void of all emotion climbed the stairways of my heart
  • Choosing to reflect on a life that somehow meant to start
  • Revealing all of the secrets that belong inside my head
  • When I always meant to walk away from where I dared to tread
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  • Do I lose all sense and reason when I focus on a single face?
  • Crashing down defences keep my plans away from every place
  • Walking away from thoughts that block my vision of the future
  • Daring to believe it’s right to take my dreams much further.
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  • Though shadows follow closely behind my every step
  • I’m destined for the feelings that control the thoughts inside my head
  • So I take careful steps to walk on solid ground not sand
  • Looking for the reasons to reach out and take an empty hand.
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  • Longing for acceptance in every step that I may take
  • Trying to make sure that if I bend I’ll never have to break
  • Emerging from the comfort of the days that went before
  • Reaching out for what’s behind both sealed and open doors.
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  • I know sometimes I talk more than I listen
  • For that I hope you’ll accept my apology.
  • I know that sometimes you get really angry
  • If I’m not who or what you want me to be.
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  • But you know I love you more than words can say
  • I need to say it now so that you won’t walk away
  • You will never know just how much you mean to me
  • So I’m telling you now so that you can really see
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  • CHORUS
  • Still I see your eyes each time that I close mine
  • I can’t see a sunset without seeing your face in my mind
  • I’m losing all the loneliness that made me feel I wasn’t enough
  • Could this be how two hearts know that they’re in love?

DEFENDER'S RAP

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