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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- This verse goes out to the defeated and drowned
- The burnt out the ones who are hurt now
- The ones with the worst doubt feel like you down
- Let me help you now ill receive the welts
- Have you ever felt that you couldn't tell
- Whether you living in hell or caught in a spell
- Please believe in me and don't dwell i know it well
- Defeated and felled let me reach for your hand
- I understand man but damn you a king
- Live for your dreams don't settle for anything
- Less than the best you in the ring this is the test
- And i must confess your opponent is knowing
- That your holding your heart to the chest
- There's no rest for the wicked but you're not evil
- No big deal forget sinning focus on winning
- And be real and i have realized real eyes recognize real lines
- and we write to bring to life
- What we see inside put on a beat and pay mind
- To the rhymes that you enlist this is it
- No going back time to resist give a kick
- when you get shoved show your enemy love
- you've been sent from above i think you're in need of a hug
- But you're bleeding and starved a bit alarmed
- That you'll be harmed if you open up
- This is enough don't act tough just be yourself
- And if you're in need of some help let me dispel
- The illusion of you ever loosing you're moving up from this well
- and i can tell you've got that spark
- Rapping can be hard but these bars bark when we are hard at work
- thinking of words that could work it can drive us berserk
- but we try till it twerks and try to see me when I'm laying a line
- You will find that i find it hard to rhyme sometimes
- but my minds made up i cant shake
- Its so rough but you're tough so when you feel stuck just think of me
- we could be in this together that means forever
- and ill never say you're not enough its tough love
- so don't run stay by my side we can ride through
- the night cause we brighter than lights and look
- I'm struggling to not cry no lie if you were gone
- I just might not be able to do it how can i move through it without you
- You the reason I need this I'm your reason too
- Any season believe this I'm here for you we cool
- So pull through please for me pretty please and drop heat
- and never give up because to me you are the one
- Peace
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Diamond_shine_2-o:
- I can't get u out my head
- Thinking about when I was soaking in your bed
- Even after u cheated on me
- I still took u back
- I feel as if I regret that
- But u know ain't u gotta lie to me
- But maybe I was wrong to think we were meant to be
- I thought we was goin' to be together
- While I am soaking in your ocean
- U a traitor using me fo sex
- Mine get the fuck out my life
- With all those lies
- Saying baby please
- But he ain't just for you he for everybody
- My name ain't molly
- So nigga there is no sorry
- When I ask who you texting
- You always say nobody
- With me you gotta pay a fee
- Take me out on shopping sprees
- Plenty of days I felt like calling these niggas pussy's
- Since you been hanging with your buddies we started all that fucking fussing
- TwistedThingz:
- The fucker cheats, the girl weeps
- Tears leak, but she won't admit defeat
- Continue on, find someone better
- Don't change yourself, there's no pressure
- They fucked with you, toyed with you like you were just a sock puppet
- But you're better than that. Don't let them take advantage of ya
- That pussy fuckin' every other bitch, but you the one
- If he was loyal, them bitches prolly gon' pimp him
- He fucked it up, blew his operation
- Like he did when he fell, dropped his empty handgun
- Shot himself, a suicide convention
- A truth so sick 'n crooked, it could be twisted
- But no matter how bad you treat her, how much she's used
- She's a beauty, the 'diamond' will shine, she sealed that wound
- If you can't see it, don't try to get a hit
- The 'diamond' gon' shine even without your ass
- Why cry when you lose an asshole that cheats?
- Carry on, move on, get a loyal gentleman, let the bitch accept defeat
- Used as a sex slave? There's a new way you've paved.
- Now you the one he idolize, staring at your photo for days, has it framed
- Failed, succeed. Who am I to declare? The fucker lost a treasure for three long weeks
- Them tears just make you stronger, just 'cause he used you for your body, don't make you a whore
- If he's fucking every other girl, he's the whore.
- The man-bitch, crossin', switchin' still transitionin'. Who to be, he ain't sure
- Not a bitch, not a sex idol. How was she 'spose to know you wanted to fuck her 'n leave?
- A loyal girl, treat her gently, be a man 'n love her, don't just try to fuck her
- A prize should be earned, not given. I ain't just talkin' about her virginity or her pussy
- I'm talkin' 'bout helpin' her, supportin' her, bein' there for her no matter what (you'll see)
- Soon she'll prolly have somethin' better, where she's the center, the main focus
- Fuck those other girls, stay with her, she's your girl, you owe her all of this
- If you treat your girl badly, just remember:
- She can always get someone better.
- Be loyal to her, treat her good. It ain't just about gettin' her body.
- Now she smarter, more clever.
- She wants real love. Don't fuck that shit up.
- If you do, you're done. She'll go find someone else. Eventually.