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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • look up at the sky, tell me, what do you find?
  • cause when I look up at the sky, you come up in my mind
  • and I guess you are blind, clouds obstructing your eyes
  • you don't remember the nights we spent with each other outside?
  • we slept on the lawn, together, when the weather was warm
  • never a storm til I woke up, and there was terror at dawn
  • when I turned my head, to the emptiness, my treasure was gone
  • and the message of this letter was born
  • now we sentimental souls were severed, never could go together
  • I remember we were broke as ever, but love kept our hopes up
  • playing bootlegged Tomb Raider, and using newspapers to roll up
  • and drinking cheap beer with no buzz, out of old cups
  • but then you went and ditched me, you fucking left the city
  • and didn't try to keep in touch I guess you never missed me
  • so then our dreams vanished, I was indeed panicked
  • so to refrain from going crazy I just keep rapping

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Love is the like gold if mixed with fillings it would be soft,
  • abhorrence filled the world so you need to be strong u need to hold ,
  • cause i have been thought that love is cold, strict and mold,
  • after years in abhorrence, finally i could metaphors what i have been told,
  • decided to try it, cause ma filings couldn’t hide it
  • i was meek cause ,i believed love is so weak
  • so reek, hard as teak,
  • but i was a fool cause i thought wasn't right at all
  • so i opened the door smelt
  • love odor, began to weep in horror, was selfish,
  • know i don't love i adore
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  • love don't know young or old
  • if u don't love you must be odd
  • but beware who u love and be hold
  • cause love can't be sold

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