Battles  therealsam vs MR-MorningStar

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • i thought i would be forever lonely
  • but i found a girl
  • and she is in my dreams
  • and shes everything that i would wanna be
  • but there is just one thing
  • i dont think shes knows i exist
  • but i would love for her to be my first kiss
  • and my heart is racing
  • because she just looks amazing
  • her smile brings me to paradise
  • and i think it would be nice
  • if i could see her face in my life every single day
  • i can only pray that she will be in my life someday
  • i love her in every single way
  • she's funny she's sweet and kind
  • she will always be on my mind
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  • i wish this girl could be mine
  • i wish this girl could see me in her eyes
  • i wish this girl could let her life and give me a chance
  • i wish this girl could notice me sometime
  • i wish this girl could give me a sign
  • i wish this girl could be my sunshine forever
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  • every time i see i can feel my heart beat faster
  • every time i hear her i just wanna be with her
  • she will always be the one that i want to be with forever
  • but i know we will never be together
  • but i can dream
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  • i wish this girl could be mine
  • i wish this girl could see me in her eyes
  • i wish this girl could let her life and give me a chance
  • i wish this girl could notice me sometime
  • i wish this girl could give me a sign
  • i wish this girl could be my sunshine
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  • girl I know you don't know me
  • But can you come in and show me
  • some of that love that I need
  • And we can be

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I've been watchin' you from afar
  • For as long as I can remember
  • You're all a real man can need
  • And ever ask for This is love, girl
  • This is more than a crush
  • It was Harlem at the Ruckers, I saw with your man
  • Smilin', huh, a Coach bag in your hand
  • I was layin' in the coupe with my hat turned back
  • We caught eyes for a moment, and that was that
  • So I skated off, as you strolled off
  • Lookin' at them legs, god-damn they looked so soft (so fine)
  • I gotta take ya from your man that's my mission
  • If his love is real, he got ta handle competition
  • You only knew him five months (that's right)
  • Besides, he drinks too much and smoke too many blunts
  • And I be workin' out everyday thinkin' 'bout you
  • Looking at my own eyes in the rearview
  • Catchin' flashbacks of our eye contact
  • Wish I could lay ya on your stomach and caress your back
  • I would hold ya in my arms and ease your fears
  • I can't believe it, I hadn't had a crush in years
  • Hey lover, hey lover, this is more than a crush
  • Hey lover, hey lover, this is more than a crush
  • Lover, hey lover, this is more than a crush
  • Hey lover, hey lover, this is more than a crush
  • I see you at the bus stop waitin' everyday
  • Your man must think it's safe for you to travel that way
  • But I don't want ta violate your relationship
  • So I lay back in the cut with a crush that's a trip
  • Still, he can't stop me from having daydreams
  • Tonguin' you down with, uh, vanilla ice cream
  • Kissing on your thighs in the moonlight
  • Searchin' your body with my tongue, girl, all night
  • I wonder one day could it be (how I wonder), simple dreams turnin' into reality
  • Our love would come down so naturally
  • We would walk down the aisle of destiny
  • What your man got his hustle on gotcha type scared
  • Break ya off a little chump change to do your hair
  • That seems to be enough to satisfy your needs
  • But there's a deeper level if you just follow my lead
  • Hey lover, hey lover, this is more than a crush
  • Hey lover, hey lover, this is more than a crush
  • Lover, hey lover, this is more than a crush
  • Hey lover, hey lover, this is more than a crush
  • Last week I saw ya at the mall
  • Standin' at the pay phone 'bout to make a call
  • I had a vision it was me on the other end
  • Tellin' you come by and then you walked in
  • I touched you gently with my hands
  • We talked about travelin' the distant lands
  • Escapin' all the madness out here in the world
  • Becomin' my wife, no longer my girl
  • Then, you let your dress fall down to the floor
  • I kissed you softly and you yearned for more
  • We experienced pleasure unparallel
  • Into an ocean of love, we both fell
  • Swimmin' in the timeless, currents of pure bliss
  • Fantasies interchangin' with each kiss
  • Undyin' passion unities our souls
  • Together we swim until the point of no control, but
  • It's a fantasy it (that, you) won't come true
  • We never even spoke, and your man swear he love you
  • So I'm a keep all these feelin's inside (that's right)
  • Keep my dreams alive until the right time

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