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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I'm in pain. Pain! And not the type of shit you'd find inside a video game
  • The kind of pain when someone fucks you over and your not left the same
  • Do i remember what it felt like? No i was to busy mourning
  • The fact that i had hoped to see her by me in the early hours of the morning
  • So i was led astray, and thats okay, just a reason to go and smoke my pains away
  • The addiction was getting worse, i was against the universe once again
  • But when she walked outside that door i was left without a gain
  • I didn't want her to leave my side, i tried to make her stay
  • I didn't want to hurt her, i still loved her but she didn't feel the same
  • Used as a fucking rebound,
  • Waking up to her voice, even a whisper, was such a sweet sound
  • I made her breakfast, i did everything i could just to provide for her
  • Saw her in the street the other day, happier than we ever were
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  • Broke hearts, oh woah woah,
  • Broke hearts, oh woah woah,
  • Broke hearts

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I lost a loved one who was so compassionate, the knife I stuck was just an accident,
  • My intent was vacillant, this ain't no abracadabra magic shit, I shot rounds from the cabinet,
  • The pain was consuming me, he ain't pass the Tylenol, so the glock responded 'n made him fall,
  • The neighbors made the call, the body was collected, but the Doc' escaped undetected,
  • He had lost all of the affection from his parent, least he had the decency to have the body disinfected,
  • The school was not alarmed, this crime was expected, his loved one was in danger, and nobody could protect him,
  • Now that he thinks back he realizes the level of capacity, left his loved ones body hanging off the nursing home balcony,
  • He misses him everyday, on his loved one he was dependent, and no written will bring him back, bunch a' ineffective sentences,
  • They were both raised by the same father, an author who's goal in life was to make sure his kids prospered,
  • Weeks after that killing they found his torso attached to a chopper, and found his eyeballs gettin' chewed on by a grasshopper,
  • In conclusion, the Doctor lost his marbles via the seclusion, every second of his life became a motherfucking delusion,
  • An illusion, pics of the bodies in a diligent resolution, the Doctor's handing out death sentences like the drug distribution,
  • And he's getting sentenced, his loved ones fallen by his hand, in a prison cell, his mouth fiddled with like he's at the dentist,
  • The cops apprehended, he tried pretending that his parent was the cause of death, but the cops slapped his face, and started to arrest him,

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