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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- you ain't eminem kid, so keep your shit simple
- like your mind is at the moment all you poppin be some pimples
- you don't get it do you? i'll make you understand
- that you need to stop forcing doing something that you can't
- now if this is all for fun, keep it up and i get it
- but ur attempt at lyricism is just frankly pathetic
- so if you're thinking of a rap career then you should prepare
- dropping an album just to find out that it doesn't compare
- unless you make some change, don't approach this so brainless
- throwing random words around hoping for magic, it's aimless
- there's no meaning in your songs, your wordplay ain't ill
- in rap the lyrical content beats out the technical skill
- of which you have none, so pack your shit up you're done
- unless you start writing at your level, that level ain't even 1
- you're still doing the tutorial, but can't figure out how to move
- so go outside, touch some grass, see the sun, then improve
- and if i come back, and my criticism ain't felt
- then your ass is gonna be choosing between the spoon and the belt
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