Battles  makaveli vs shoreboy

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • see I didn't pick the name makaveli
  • so you can tell me that I'm not like him
  • so don't condemn on a high sin like hatred
  • Ima fake it as long as it takes it
  • cause my momma said I would never make it
  • and it did hurt a little bit but I couldn't quit
  • I had to keep on going knowing that she was wrong
  • but my loves still strong for the woman she is
  • and as long as she lives my heart still gives
  • all that it can I am a man in the eyes of the lord
  • my tongue is a sword you rap cause you bored
  • I rap cause a soared high enough to make impression
  • to press harder and aim farther than my father
  • but the truth is I'm useless unless I use this to prove this
  • world that im not another nigga with his finger on the trigger,
  • and chasing after figures
  • this is poetic justice for justice that aint served cause I deserved
  • remorse for the course I had to ride on I could have died on ...
  • but I survived cause i love my life just like its Jesus Christ telling
  • paradise to wait for me even though it aint for me cause i sin for the saint glory
  • aint the same story you heard from a bird on the grape vine
  • ima let it just happen cause it takes time and aint the same time
  • ima work hard go hard play hard stay smart do art
  • so i start from my heart to do my part to move on
  • and prove wrong the right ones despite ones own image
  • so i aint gonna mimic makaveli so automatically shut down like a old pc
  • all eyes on me as i fly free

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • I destroy bitches harder than any dictator
  • Got all the sluts saying "I'll see your dick later"
  • Even your ugly ass mom, but shit I wouldn't date her
  • I'll just pipe her everyday, lift that ass like an elevator
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  • Your old and rusty, I'm fresh like some hot buns
  • Your style is messy like suicide with a shotgun
  • Your shunned from life, while I'm welcomed like God's son
  • Uh-oh your in a sticky situation like you're stuck in my cock's cum
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  • Enough with the likes and yours, let me explain YOU
  • No one likes you prick, your shunned at everything YOU do
  • From rapping even to breathing, you are not liked dude
  • If I could kill someone legally, I'll do it faster than YOU can say "Who?"
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  • I think faster than you, I'll leave you in a cerebral smoke trail
  • Beat your shit up like it's done been through hell
  • I'll knock you down, like how the Towers "fell"
  • No one is sure who did it, Iraq, the government, shh, I'm not suppose to tell
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