Battles Jabo808 vs DJMALCOLM
RULES
write a song about struggles or about your life max of 64 lines
Max of 64 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- we all have our pain
- we all get through our struggles
- yea uhhh yea
- i done seen it all people was taking my heart
- and it left me so scarred yall just left me off guard
- and now i'm just losing my all baby i gave you my heart
- and you let me take the fall im sure thats what i recall
- my mind was so small i walked lonely down the hall
- yall were leaving me so broken i didn't know if i was chosen
- it caused an explosion and i was woken
- my peace was stolen my heart was swollen
- i left myself open i thought i was done
- ooo please help me someone
- im pushing random buttons like lifting heavy tons
- these were bad intentions leaving your presence
- i was getting vengeance learning life lessons
- but i had so many questions
- am i loved if so why am i judged
- my hearts been crushed so many times i think i'm out of luck
- most of the time i just dont give a fuck
- wondering if i should just unplug the plug
- maybe that will be enough calling my bluff
- am i not enough
- i've been a witness to pain wondering how to maintain
- its leaving a stain i'm just left in vain
- i cannot complain i've lost the main
- again and again driving my mind through rain
- i done seen it all people was taking my heart
- and it left me so scarred yall just left me off guard
- and now i'm just losing my all baby i gave you my heart
- and you let me take the fall im sure thats what i recall
- my mind was so small i walked lonely down the hall
- yall were leaving me so broken i didn't know if i was chosen
- give me your heart i'll give you my all
- we can travel so far take a trip to mars
- i'm making these bars just tryna go hard
- im losing my spark i thought i was smart
- but from the world i depart its leaving a mark
- im so scared running a hunnid yards
- leaving my heart in broken shards
- its torn me apart just leave me alone in the dark
- im must say i've never felt this way
- the world is a place of gray and its taking my faith away
- here in my bed i lay please stay away im not feeling today
- from my mind i am stray
- to the lord i pray can you help me today
- take away the pain let me explain i'm going insane
- it's taking my breath away maybe someday
- i'll rise to fame take all my pain away
- i don't want to run away maybe its not to late
- i could still ease the pain my breath i could gain
- i cannot complain i must leave the hurricane
- i done seen it all people was taking my heart
- and it left me so scarred yall just left me off guard
- and now i'm just losing my all baby i gave you my heart
- and you let me take the fall im sure thats what i recall
- my mind was so small i walked lonely down the hall
- yall were leaving me so broken i didn't know if i was chosen
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Intro:
- What am I doing now? I don't know
- Where exactly am I going to go?
- When will I feel okay? I don't know
- Who here feels the same, tell me so
- I'm at the point now where I don't know what to write about
- I can type it out, but there's no emotion behind it now
- Sure I got bars, but what am I actually saying
- There's no content, am I content rapping the same things?
- How can I ever expect to be fucking anything
- It's not like I even sound any good when I sing
- Dawg I can rhyme, thats never been a problem of mine
- Shit that's something that I can do when not even tryin'
- But when it comes time to write substantial shit
- You would think that I just got my hands full bitch
- I can say I have relationships issues, but I do not
- I can say I got drug problems but I only use pot
- Didnt want you to know but when the other shoe drops
- Truth is I spit that shit cause the actual truths not
- All that interesting, my life's in reality boring
- I say I fuck bitches, but I'm not actually scoring
- The only time I am honest with the mic when I'm on it
- Is those couple a songs where I say I'm not shit
- There are times I'm anxious with some suicidal thoughts
- On the bridge thinking like "jump dude just try it once"
- It's crazy, cause nothing in my life should make me think it
- Unless I'm not seeing something, was I maybe blinking?
- Cause my parents raised me right, I was loved day and night
- They would say they loved me, and might even say it twice
- So why then do I have thoughts to fucking take my life
- It seems a bit like a statement by nationwide
- If it were to come on saying "hi, we'll take your side"
- You'd notice that something there ain't quite right
- But maybe writing raps has made these things magnify
- Is the stress to be the best making my brain get fried?
- Is this why I wanna pay a guy to shoot my face tonight
- But I don't cause I'm scared what lies beyond the great divide
- Cause I'm a faithless guy, and if it's some great divine
- Being that I'm seeing, them imma be burned in flames alive
- Or whatever the hell happens to the worst in hell
- I tried to love the lord but well, he made this earth a hell
- So the pain I have hurts like hell, yeah this sure is swell
- Feeling so worthless fell-as, if you feel like dirt as well
- Then we better try to show a lil love to those that we love
- Give a friend a hand if they can't hold themselves up
- This the one life that we have got a chance to live
- Let's make the best of it man, we can not quit!