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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- So if you ain't pitching nothing about cash, Ima have to blast,
- Desert eagle and the four four, we keep it cocked, ho,
- Deep minds generate the hardest electric field lines,
- Radio and commerce conspire, trying to kill mine,
- But what they still find, is a rap that last for the ages,
- Understand this monstrosity, Im like best book you never read,
- Im jamming and planning my rap exit, so hard the papers wet,
- They say Im dirty, maybe its cause I got left out in the mud,
- Fool, Im only a mirror, what you throw back, I learn and go rap,
- They say my flow lack the commercial elements,
- Rap is a lot more than just guns and crime,
- Im about vocabulary, science, thats why them labels ain't funding mine,
- So if society is the monstrosity, then Ill be the righteous one,
- And Ill keep preaching till the fight is won,
- Atrocious, I split the verbose like a fissile reaction,
- My raps? Is like watching a missile in action,
- Combinational torment, weak rappers get mad jealous,
- But I ain't a hater, or a faker, Im like "Ha! fellas",
- When I drop this grammar, like a rock is hammered,
- Industrial grade flows, ever the invigilator,
- So get your examination, blast raps and facts to pass,
- Rap aspirants get sent back to class,
- A statistical anomaly in this matrix, interchangeable flows like math,
- Fuck a night-cap, Im drinking vodka and juice,
- My styles in effect, and it ought to confuse,
- Lining my jacket with the blood of dignitaries,
- Competition get inhibited like the Reds in the space race,
- Minority, a slugger, and I gots to face hate,
- Might discharge this full clip into you from a tommy gun,
- And then pray for repentance,
- Those were the old days,
- But my life was practically over when it started,
- See it don't matter what I do,
- I was cursed, now all I got is this tight verse,
- And it might hurt sentiments of the majority,
- But life is a bitch, and that shit makes you flip,
- So I pull into my cranium, and watch these raps land,
- Yeah G, it's somewhat half planned,
- A math fan? Im gonna recite Godel and the axioms of number sets,
- And then elucidiate about a nun's regret,
- 45 G's short, I ain't got much funding left,
- I seperate charges and cause dipole moments,
- Comment on your brains five old torments,
- And pull out your girls G-strings,
- Just tempt me, and see the carnage we bring,
- Worth five shillings and I ain't getting richer,
- So I stick to these words and try to paint this, which hit ya,
- Trapped in a life of regret and sorrow, looking for the exit sign,
- I got talent and promise, but no group, cause my set declined,
- See I come from the rough and rugged,
- The outskirts of where they used ta dump the corpses and flee,
- Ventricular stimulation, I got the CIA investigating my wordplay,
- Cause Im liable to cause erratic electrocardiograms through what I say,
- A master of hypnosis, check the words of my album,
- Son, this a deep-sea, creeps be comparing me to you,
- that's like a shark to salmon, Im the chosen one,
- If rapping get me money, then Im closing sums,
- Ya weak crew pose with guns,
- novel solitary elaborate mind that is known to rock flows and stop hoes,
- My mental defenses is impenetrable to false ideologies,
- Logically dissect even the finest of rhetoric, I'm a trained scientist,
- The page is my electric field and your mind gets ionized off the combinatorics,
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Hook:
- I Believe Jesus is the one true God I confess with my mouth he is
- He is the one that saved our lives from being in a beer with no fizz
- I believe i believe
- Lyrics:
- I may sin i may curse but Jesus was perfect he gave me salvation
- He is in control of me you know he is in control of this situation
- My Friend you may not understand but when you die there's two places
- One is Hell one is Heaven both with a H when you die there's no car races
- I confess i have sinned lord please forgive me give me another chance
- To the person that is reading this just know there's blessings in advance
- When i gave my life to Christ it changed the all of me
- He said My Child you and i was meant to be
- I'm not perfect unlike Christ we ain't perfect we are sinners
- But when the eternity race starts Christ wins we are winners
- Hook:
- I Believe Jesus is the one true God i confess with my mouth he is
- He is the one that saved our lives from being in a beer with no fizz
- I believe I believe