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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • I've had it up to here with Morello and Slash, the good ones are passed
  • and the dead are in masse, giving good news to fans, Stan's never left
  • the stands, giving up for cash and the music suffers a crash and X goes
  • last, Zibit like a hitlist, it doesn't make sense to rap this, to trap a beat in
  • glass from breakfast to supper, dead air to sucker, give me an upper cut you
  • like butter, Death Row in the gutter, I'll say it now and i'll say it proud
  • Sugh Knight's in town, throwing in the towel bloody scowl cause he's
  • dead now, Killswitch is Chronic, son of a demonic, presents to the hobbits
  • he's small like vomit but next to be honored cause this world has no logic
  • X man and Superfly from Daikatana, Make you my bitch like Romero comic
  • Power packs fly off the shelves in Angmar steady, beat you to bloody bit
  • like Westernesse at the ready, This ain't Gladden, this is Pelennor fields
  • we keep it real, coming at you with drawn steel, Hell is deep, Helm will
  • bleed, crowns and things, Tupac and Biggie Treated like Kings cause Sauron
  • got fucked in his ding ding with the ring on his dick, invisible bling see
  • we're headed back to murder a bitch and trash all his shit
  • I'm hard like Elephant dick, never go soft except for a bit, call up saint nick
  • send explosive presents to Gollum and stick another bomb on for Frodo
  • and liv, Tyler got with Skyler and they put on a gig, Two peas in a tripod
  • and That's about it
  •  
  • Now on to the story, I was with Frodo and sortie, making a 40 when we got a call
  • about Orcs at the border, sneaking alcohol and a quarter of weed, we were
  • ordered to bleed and steal that shit for the police but we smiled and said
  • "we're high or we're dead" and we joined all the guys in a smoke filled
  • shack on the bend, spit shit and then saw the skies part, Eru took a blow
  • and Earth merged with Earth now the Shire's homegrown, i'm Loco
  • this is so so but the look on their faces made me want for a paper
  • and the next morning I saw it: Sauron wins election for Mayor
  • and war is in session, Republic wants it's due, queue dead senators
  • and an unending line of tanks and generals, marching on D.C
  • This fucked with me so i made a wish on a star and found myself
  • back in the bar and left in my car, not seeing the Balrog in the rear view
  • Fuck my head feels wrong, like mildew, i think i need a pill, that'll do
  • Next morning news: Mordor wants china too
  • What do we do?

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Hi, you must be new so let me do this for you
  • My name is OGF, Imma create persona who's name is Jeff
  • Jeff is def a dev, he plays to much better call the ref
  • Jeff had anything in life, cars, money he could rap bars
  • And even had a honey that came without the money, his life was sunny
  • Hell has come, but your story kinda bored me, so now it's our turn
  • Not even mine, I do the planning and Jeff does the crime
  • Persona Jeff
  •  
  • Jeff was on the streets, he parked his car and listening to beats
  • creating fire ideas, he called them heats but it was the first day
  • when after his winning streets it was the beginning of heavy defeats
  • Knocked on the window of his Lambo, picture this in slow mo,
  • Some hooded guy smoking indo, threatening him so
  • Jeff was shocked and didn't know where to go.
  • Refuse to cooperate, the hooded gun shot with proper weight
  • Blasted outside his ride, he now had his own life to fight
  • For, Jeff thought he couldn't go anymore, before he blacked out
  • and woke up with his body in white beds and more.
  • Now he just wanted to say that, he appreciated all the support
  • the doctors gave him and they had his back
  • Now he's acting God what this is all suppose to be
  • How long does Jeff has to be in nursery undergoing surgery
  • in Germany where he was transported to after that emergency where
  • Jeff got shot and was placed in the infirmary
  • Fueled with the rage like an animal, Jeff trained like a hungry cannibal
  • Chasing his feeling for revenge that's almost tangible, to take it upon himself
  • to give him hell and trouble and the damage double, isn't that a bit irrational?
  • A familiar voice sounded from the back of the, better than gold and sexier than silver
  • It was his wife his pillar, who new the name and location of his almost killer
  • Jeff decided to divorce her, God was his source and his reports told Jeff his wife
  • is a dangerous force.
  • Jeff was def a dev, definitely a developer, a html editor turned into a predator
  • without a competitor.
  • Once in the city all these emotions causing commotions, more than ocean's motions
  • The memories and his wife being part of the Trojans
  • Went back to his house, no one was around, only his past on the ground,
  • How it became clear that it was his own fault he allowed this to happen
  • Where he almost drowned.
  •  
  • Jeff fueled with anger driving faster than Ferrari's Micheal
  • Looking in a mirror seeing a psycho holding in one hand a rifle
  • Booking flights to heaven holding in is other hand a Bible
  • Not planning on any revival when this act will be his final
  • Stepped outside the car, crossed the bridge, but had no hook
  • He continued driving listening to the sound of the track,
  • His car shook, incoming instrumental horn, a bit wack
  • But the beat hit hard, Jeff saw black and the beat smack.

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