Battles King_Kold_Blade vs M-Sav
RULES
write about your physical/mental/emotional problems don't diss the other person unless it's subliminal we both write to the same beat
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- it was long distance
- but it was strong, listen
- found out what was missing
- you were just love trippin
- you are just the worst see
- but you can't hurt me
- this new girl is worth thee
- time that I gave you three
- this part to my new girl
- you are my whole damn world
- your beauty like a Pearl
- my ex is still the Worst
- my ex, I thought was over you
- to bae, this feeling isn't New
- this is only said to Few
- I think that I love you
- bae never wanna admit it
- you are the thoughts that I sit in
- your love, you know that I pick it
- my love, you know that I give it
- thinking bout you countless times
- writing to you countless lines
- video calling countless nights
- on you seen countless Smiles
- all my exes shitty but you different right
- all of you made me stay up all night
- you all said forever but this time I hope you try
- i hope this don't become another fight
- i hope I dont piss off another girl on another night
- i hope I dont mess up another mother fucking time
- i hope i dont go back to wanting to die
- but you make everything alright
- but so did my ex
- before I said next
- i am just a wreck
- rapping for my check
- pretending I feel blessed
- pretending I'm not stressed
- guess what I'm depressed
- and I easily get obsessed
- I don't wanna die
- just wanna help these kids through their tough times
- I'm writing rhymes
- just wanna show I don't do it for dimes
- I do it to show how I feel
- I do it to show life ain't Ideal
- okay I'll make a Deal
- rapping bout my problems it's real
- trynna turn the bad to good
- I really think that I Should
- now I'm wishing that I could
- I know everyone else Would
- but I gotta calm down
- I am just a Clown
- lemme give you the crown
- before I sink and drown
DEFENDER'S RAP
- //0:20//
- Man there’s a lotta things that I could say,
- I could open up but then you’ll go away,
- Cuz it’s happened before no one ever wanna stay,
- Cuz they looking for the rainbow and my skies steady gray.
- See I’ve been battling myself for so long,
- Roaming thru the streets just tryna find my home,
- Cuz home ain’t a place it’s somewhere you belong,
- and I think it’s you I hope I’m not wrong.
- Cuz I’ve been hurt used left in the dirt,
- I've been drowning in all this hurt,
- Hoping for the better but it just gets worse,
- and lately feel like I got sum curse.
- Because I’m never truly happy it’s like a drug,
- lasts for the moment but then it’s done...
- and when I get to close to someone I just run,
- and everybody thinks my life is so fun?
- They don’t know how I feel, like I’m going insane,
- Happy sad then mad in a short time frame,
- Tell me how the fuck do I explain,
- that a mental illness is eating my brain,
- And now I feel so hopeless,
- I know this ain’t the life I’ve chosen,
- sitting in the dark jus feeling broken,
- wishing life would just return my token.
- Let me start again,
- let me find some friends
- my life don’t got to end,
- there yelling “do it man”
- the thoughts inside my head...
- Demons in my bed,
- can’t help but think I'm better off dead.
- And I need your help,
- but I feel like someone else,
- I’m sleeping less and less, I know it’s bad for my health,
- I’m jus sick and tired of being hurt,
- can’t find the words so I put it in a verse,
- Losing my grip, I need some force
- just need to hang on for a little more...