Battles  SnoopyJ vs HarryWeintroub

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • i see you listening to my voice but your not hearing the words i'm saying
  • come a little closer to these meanings and you'll realize my verbs are slaying
  • every fucking subject and predicate but my sentences have no deficit
  • you see there's powder on my bars, but my my lyrics can't grasp the literate
  • every metaphor and lick of wordplay is tasteless to those who read them
  • but those ridiculous rhymes you recognize as rivers, my lyrics freeze them
  • i'll have you running your fingers along my words like your in the labyrinth
  • trying to find the key to my meanings but not one damn locksmith has them
  • but it's all good it's alright, you know if i could then ill write
  • a fucking understandable verse that doesn't put ya brain in reverse
  • and runs me insane when I rehearse
  • like I've came back from dead, got shot in head and put back my hearse

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • this battle im gonna write from the heart respect my art and show some class
  • for too long ive been actin like a fuckin dumbass
  • passin the grass whilst writing laughable paragraphs
  • but now ive changed my path opened my eyes and im tryin to see
  • to learn from the lyrics you preach and improve myself through what i speak
  • and not abuse myself with an ego that is bad for my health
  • because seriously this is my only way to excel and rebel
  • its not fair i cant fortell the future so i fall back and dwell
  • coz im a loser who raps through a computer
  • shootin down every chance i get to take a chance and earn respect
  • so instead i sit here curled around a router livin a numb life of dull
  • fuck it i prolly got lyrically burned by a 12 year old schoolgirl

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