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Battle on December 23 2020

CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • My style of rap is contradicting
  • I sigh because I can’t grasp the fact that people ain’t listening
  • While I flashback to my exes in the past, I have a vision
  • I glance back, At the fun that I had, and wish that I could be wit em.
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  • The fun we had, the memories we shared
  • We’d had just begun, now they’re enemies, I wish I could of showed them that I cared
  • But what now? I’m sitting here, crying, my eyes are full of tears,
  • there faces hunting me like a nightmare
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  • I didn’t no what I had, until it was gone
  • I was a hypocrite, insulting them, thinking I was being strong
  • But in reality, my personality, was suffering a fatality,
  • none of my relationships were lasting long
  • I’m trying not to face reality, so I replaced the pain with this song
  • I’m in this game, and trying to stay strong
  • Now don’t get me wrong, I know it was my fault,
  • and now my heavy heart I have to haul
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  • Hook:
  • I’m standing in the rain
  • I’m trapped in a circle of pain
  • My feelings packed, and it follows my way
  • My heart was smacked, but I have to swallow the pain (x2)
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  • (Instrumental hook plays)
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  • Verse 2:
  • Pain hits my brain, it’s an apocalypse
  • It’s Insane, it rips, an inch of my confidence
  • And throws it away
  • Open up the door, the rain hits my face
  • No one comes forward, but I remain in my place
  • Hoping they’ll answer the door, and there love I will obtain
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  • But then I wake up, sunlight shining through my window
  • My hands shake yuh, my energy goes from a 5 to a Zero
  • I’m sweating, and regretting, the fact that I’m betting
  • That in the ending, and I’ll get her back, but then I get a text on my Mac
  • Reading that she already fell in... love..

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • :58 (ĐƦ ᑎ✺ᐯᗩ 🅥🅔🅡🅢🅔 1 )
  • It was my 3rd Try/ being the nice Guy/
  • Playing the plenty fish Bate/ on another internet Date/
  • Hopeing Fate might stay up Late/ for me this time Finally//
  • It’s been awhile living life so Privately/// & so Quietly/// Shy/
  • Before I met you the only girl who loved me got me High/
  • Maryjane/ was her Name/ I would often burn her not to feel most Pain/
  • But I still felt Lonely// Mostly//@ social events my plus one was always Ghostly//
  • Another Absentee// part of Me// trying to fix my emotional Debris//
  • Stuck inside of Me// wanting to Be// Free//from all this Misery//
  • I keep doing to Me// Baby//
  • Yo I got a Confession///
  • I’m not just trying to have just another fuck Session///
  • I actually want a meaningful Connection///
  • With someone I could give my time & Attention/// & Affection///
  • To women worth more then any kind of Physical Possession///
  • So tell Me/ girl do you feel Me/ or is there Another//
  • Because I would be happy to make you my Lover//
  • Your so god damn Sexy / as woman can Be/
  • These games your playing with Me/ is driving Me/ so Crazy/
  • Of thought of possibly losing You// for some other Dude//
  • All I can do scream Yo/// please don’t Go///
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  • 1:55( Beat Drops with 🏷) (drasonthebeat)
  • (Hook 2)
  • Because I said No
  • That doesn’t mean No ..... (Don’t u Ever ... Don’t u Ever ...
  • ...................No oh..................
  • And just cause I Mad..........
  • That doesn’t me you have to Go ..... (Don’t u Ever ... Don’t u Ever ...
  • ...................Go Go..................
  • Because I love Ya................
  • And I need Ya........................Here with Me....
  • ...................Oh Oh..................(Don’t u Ever ... Don’t u Ever ...
  • When I’m in your Arms.......
  • There no place I would rather Be......... (Don’t u Ever ... Don’t u Ever ...
  • ...................No oh..................
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  • 2:24 (ĐƦ ᑎ✺ᐯᗩ 🅥🅔🅡🅢🅔 2 )
  • Bitch you so crazy to believe I would ever become Jealous/
  • Shut your trap before your tongue get caught in the Propellers/
  • For speaking Lies// of are Demise// in this Relationship///
  • I’ve known you since I was a little Kid///
  • Loved you every day Since and still Do/
  • That’s why it hurts so much Ooh/
  • I could just kill You/ that minute you said it was Over//
  • Was the minute my heart got Colder//
  • You damn Ho/// I don’t Know/// were my heart gonna Lead Now/
  • I kinda wanting to Bleed Now/ because I can’t Breath Wow/
  • I can’t believe you had such control over Me , Myself & I//
  • Fuck I always was a strong Guy// who would never Cry// over a Break Up///
  • Beware of girls who wear slutty type of Makeup/// with D Cups///
  • High heels black Gloves/// looking sexy as can Be/
  • Fucking everybody in the trailer court but Me/
  • How could this Be
  • Why did I not See this skandalouz bitch Coming//
  • Would have rip the prenup up if I would have known about all this Fucking//
  • Your supposed to be my Life & my Wife and I’m supposed be your Husband//
  • My sorrow is now darker then burnt Cole
  • Again & again Yo how could you say No
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