Battles  Maverick vs T_dogg

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • All I remember was ..
  • All I remember was a shimmer, a flash of white light —
  • And light pitters quite thunder-esque
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  • A slight whisper, messenger to fright; "Do not fret."
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  • Since, I've been kidnapped
  • [panic]
  • By who? By what? When?
  • Why, how .. Where am I? "Is this a map?"
  • A map that spells 'PARASITE.' on the back.
  • [[panic]]
  • I'm in a black-tinted off glass box above the city with .. 9 'flaws'?
  • 9 floors. The Zodiac Killer must've written this mind gom
  • Game. Game? 9 floors is 9 levels, which means the ending is .. Find ot.
  • Interesting .. Fine dots? Constellations! Constellations as ellipsis in 9 dots?
  • No no. Should I be listing out 9 flaws? Of? Gotta be kidding me. My God.
  • Hmm, maybe 9 flaws of my Zodiac sign, maybe skipping the really nice wans?
  • 1. I'm a Sagittarius so .. I guess I'm pretty much, kinda dom
  • 2. Uh, I'm always thinking that I am wrong.
  • 3. I'm recklessly a try hard.
  • 4. Difficult
  • 5. Shy, awk
  • 6. Don't like criticizes
  • 7. My mind dark
  • 8. Wishing I was liked
  • 9. Lost
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  • Well, now I'm sweating my eyeballs ~
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  • I think if I take these to each floor maybe they'll.. It'll be my escop
  • Let's see
  • I try 1, it tells me things in writed response
  • Just like 1, says that I am 'sub'??
  • 2. 'Good thinking, you've been right all alon'
  • 3. 'Quitting isn't trying hard'
  • 4. 'Simply put'
  • 5. 'Wave hello to the tripod'
  • 6. 'Ridiculous'
  • 7. 'Remember the light flosh'
  • 8. 'I wished you would die'
  • 9. 'Gronted, you insecurities i finded all'
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  • [[[panic]]]
  • Reevaluating the map
  • P-A-R-A-S-I-T-E-.
  • Connecting those 9 dots:
  • Pain And Restlessness Are Slow Insidious Time-bombs;
  • 'Explode.'
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  • "Explode"? Was it supposed to say 'explore'?
  • Wait. Wait now
  • The clock is screaming
  • [[[[Anxiety plays out, my heart beating]]]]
  • What the fuck is the escape route?!
  • (("THERE WAS NEVER AN ENTRANCE IN THIS MAZE TO LEAD WITH"))
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  • There is no way out.
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  • Now I see it.
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  • Blew my fucking brains out.
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  • Freedom

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Hey mav, don’t mind if ma rap’s a little dark
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  • It’s because every word is being written from ma heart,
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  • Something happened in the past, i think it left a mark,
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  • Cause ever since i wasn’t happy, i just find it really hard,
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  • Felt so down, alone, depressed and discard,
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  • Felt like the world is against me, and is falling apart,
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  • Thinking i’m a disappointment from the very start,
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  • Just wanna go on flight mode and put ma life on restart
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  • Maybe then i’ll be happy, and forget about the past

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