Battles st0rm vs M-Sav
RULES
pick a song u made. try to do a recorded one if u can.
Max of 64 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- yeah all my life I have been trying to make something great
- but everything thing I have made its something people hate
- my life is going downhill at a steady rate
- im just trying to make something people will appreciate
- but now it is starting to get late
- ima move out the state
- I get to choose my own fate
- locking my door and my gate
- don't argue with me this ain't a debate
- im getting out of here now u can celebrate
- yeah im the rapper without fans
- im free today I never any plans
- im a wrestler I need to work on stance
- I can do it they just never give me a chance
- want attention and they don't even give me a glance
- there is only one me and an army that is starting to advance
- yeah it's my turn
- what I do is none of your concern
- everything I do I have to earn
- every time we say goodbye I worry that she will never return
DEFENDER'S RAP
- My flow's mighty but I'm try'na work out if you don't like me
- or perfecting projecting your own psyche, most likely.
- It's clear you aren't on it. It's clear you aren't honest.
- If you're the one "dropping bombs" I'm Barnes Wallis.
- I'm tired of these tired writers writing what they're tired of.
- You say they say the same things ; it's a trend y'all tend to try a lot.
- I'm an eminent god that legends forgot
- I'll leave your "head on the rocks" when it's severed and dropped.
- The lines you write are rude and rushed;
- Too abrupt; skewed and crushed
- Before you even threw a punch,
- I'll jump in Money: Scrooge Mcduck
- As a youth "I had followers" too, mostly cops,
- In hot pursuit with loaded glocks, scoping shots.
- "Binoculars" what? Got no reason to see for:
- C4? No you only "detonating" with weak force.
- You can't perceive the imagery, wearin' a blindfold.
- King of the ring, no bling but the Rheingold
- Forget a "fake chain"..
- You'd better make way..
- Spittin' back that ammo you feed me.
- I don't even need fake chains, like Houdini.