DEFENDER'S RAP

• A Lesson in Paragraph Formatting
• Professor Puppet, 2020
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• I believe that you will lose this battle for the following three reasons. According to the text, you thought this would be easy. But if that’s the case, here is why you ought to just keep thinking.
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• First and foremost, the reader is led to believe you thought this verse was more dope. Let me elaborate on those words with a quote. Maybe this structure works in morse code, but you said, “go wrap ya self in open wires and SWIM IN A POND, PLEASEEEEE im don” (1234567henry, Paragraph 1). This evidence shows that you have no sense of a flow, and therefore may not be receptive to growth.
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• Secondly, the verses are endlessly difficult to even attempt to read. Now generally, this issue is due to not writing legibly, so we are lead to believe that your writing skills are still developing. Therefore, you may need to prepare more before letting these words become, metaphorically, “airborn.”
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• Furthermore, this verse is sort of tired and worn, perhaps there’s something beneath the surface or it’s just a vegetable writing this, not to be confused with those consumed by herbivores. As a result, the battle is over before the opponent even gets a chance to revolt, due to the lack of actual prose that you sat down and wrote, which we simply cannot condone.
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• In conclusion, this is a stupid way to arrange a written with this useless and unfortunately dubious purpose of imitating hip hop music. Maybe next time you get into this, consider fluid writing structure and think when choosing if you’ll do it.