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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • In my mind, I've got a gun loaded
  • thoughts of overthinking, pull the trigger and then reload it for the next time I get desperate
  • whenever I take off my mask I feel kinda naked
  • my mind fills with thoughts of self-hatred
  • drowning them out with vodka, yeah that's my favorite
  • sometimes I think about slitting my throat with this knife in my pocket
  • but then I tell my girlfriend to do the opposite
  • I guess I'm a hypocrite
  • but I'm not gonna quit
  • I won't quit till I get her to quit
  • cause I swear it'd be the death of me if suicide was something that she was to commit
  • and here is something that I need to admit
  • every day I'm on the edge of saying I quit
  • saying fuck it, and giving in while grabbing that needle and doing that deadly habit
  • but I made a promise
  • even though it gets to the point where I'm screaming on the inside, I'm gonna keep it regardless
  • losing her will cause me to plunge back into my inner darkness
  • the day that her heart stops beating and her body becomes a carcass is the day I become heartless
  • it's the day that I go back to spending most of my time unconscious
  • heroin coursing through my veins
  • on the wall behind me are pieces of my brain and big ass blood stains
  • with a note next to it that explains
  • just thinking about losing her gives me head pains
  • currently, in my head, there is a couple of overthinking hurricanes
  • I'm a prisoner of my own mind, I'm locked up with my arms held above me by chains
  • i kinda hate that every time I don't like the way my life is going I switch lanes
  • I wanna stand on a train track and get hit from four different angles by oncoming trains
  • to be honest, I kinda feel like a disgrace
  • I still can't see why she doesn't just get rid of me and replace
  • but I hope to god that she doesn't cause this is the happiest I've been in 5000 days
  • I want her by my side always
  • I don't want this to just be some phase
  • I don't want her to be gone once I get through the haze
  • but who knows when I'll get out, I've been trapped in here like a maze
  • it seems like whenever I start to feel down she can lift me up again, I guess she has her ways
  • and nothing is warmer and more comorting than when I'm holding her in my embrace
  • when she calls me bubby it makes my heart race
  • you know what, fuck getting replaced this is my place
  • dont try and take it and erase
  • I'll chase you down and slit your throat
  • then i'll set your body a blaze

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • I taught him to rap but it shames me to say it
  • he never learned to write with the right rhymes or phrasing
  • this is justice, it just is, it aint hating
  • I wrote dope rap, he saw fit to take it
  • he stole my style coz he lacks in ability
  • and admitted to it, as if he still had some dignity.
  • that's exactly how it was, I keep it really real.
  • but flip it with the feat of strength kicking his achilles heel
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  • I sting and you sink to the ground like dying butterflies
  • "Alissa?", you love her?, I'm the other guy..
  • like this is a holy-field and that act's blasphemous.
  • the bad plan's amateur and lacks calibre.
  • my rap's arrogant but mad passionate..
  • your rap's.. nothing much, it's just adequate
  • you're not saying anything, anyways, stop it.
  • a year ago you showed some potential but lost it
  • by now you should be writing hard bars or some decent songs
  • what little skill you started off with only ever seems to drop.
  • Dream, you proved love of yourself but not hiphop.
  • I'd tell you to put in spirit but you're not equipped dawg.
  • I'd tell you to put in some work but you did that
  • so your moves just prove that your wit isn't fit fam
  • why try kidding me? just wise up.
  • try euthanasia, it's not a tie son.
  • Alissa sent me hella nud-, never mind p,
  • even if I spell it out you couldnt get a clever line
  • see what I did there? no? then forget it,
  • you don't know the meaning of being inventive.
  • and I won't waste hate since you're coming with nothing.
  • ..you just blow ..so I'll trump-it
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  • see, I beat him way back.. seems he's in a coma still.
  • I even pray they drop his coffin, total overkill
  • you're not required to write, you're a joke bruv.
  • I just laugh at you when you think you bring dope stuff.
  • it takes more than winning battles to win respect.
  • you need to take a long look at yourself bruh, introspect,
  • ay, there's more than just some intricate rhyme and ridiculous wordplay to my lyrics
  • I'll take 'u' out the 'game' an make... nah, it'll stay the same like you never were in it.

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