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Short rap. No Trolling. No Dissing.

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THIS BATTLE IS OVER

Anonymous won this battle!

CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • Started out at age eight, I was writing basic rhymes,
  • Wanted clout, that stage, the words I painted were tainted, it wasn't my time,
  • My time to shine; my lines and rhymes, faded while I waited, for them to become divine,
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  • But the fact is, that kid, didn't have what it took,
  • Stranded alone, with a dictionary, and a note book,
  • Life was getting scary, life had me shook, my future seemed clearer,
  • for this dream I was hooked,
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  • I'll never forget I was sitting at my cottage,
  • I was slouched on the couch, with my pen and paper, writing straight garbage,
  • To be honest, I wasn't trying my hardest, an artist, who's writing wasn't the sharpest.
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  • I got my first studio, it was down in my basement,
  • The kid who seemed so blatant, was gonna put down the pavement, and record his statement,
  • Pages scattered on the desk, "my statement", I embraced it,
  • I was gonna make it, the hate I was gonna take it, and become salient,
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  • Uploaded my first song on the cloud,
  • Went unnoticed, worse song, had me feeling down,
  • I was indeed lost, I didn't end up getting found,
  • Into a site called RapPad, brought water to this drought.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • The word “originality” should be on a bumper sticker
  • Cause y’all the spittin images of every other spitter
  • But still the money lingers, despite our clumsy fingers
  • A spendin spree is the enemy and we mustn’t run with scissors
  • And so the talent’s wasted, smoked ourselves by gettin drunk off liquor
  • Figures dwindle downwards till we numb the pain once the numbers entered
  • So it’s fuck these carbon copies tryna get a bargain off me
  • Do you act this way around ya girl? I bet y’all fun at parties
  • They say I’m a machine with it, must be cause I’m spittin all fax
  • Twilight zone, new exhibit, how I’m killer on wax

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