Battles  Vertical vs

RULES

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Battle on July 20 2021

CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I’ve got a gun...
  • i aim it at your head and your just find your self dead
  • Head pierced in all directions blood flowing out like river waters
  • Which means i killed all the raps you had recited
  • Picked the pen and writing bars with all that rhyming
  • Look where it got now your parents whining
  • Striking for some answers took your life away just because i wrote this
  • I’ve got a gun...
  • My gun is all my bars placed well in sections, i dissect human parts
  • Place them well in sections, arteries right after eyes, ears, tounge
  • Bring me the gun...
  • Well first i build it with devices other humans reject
  • Complex as space jets that SpaceX can’t come up with yet
  • My flow flows better than what we call a river flow
  • Ain’t rocks in my way but my wordplay crashes like waves
  • On a rainy summer day i go bizarre inside my brain
  • Like blizzards get you cold but my bars are point 0º
  • Zero in on my enemies
  • Reload my gun...
  • I ain’t the type to lose this fight i hunt hunters just like your name
  • I gun gunners with spoken flames i mean your name is kinda boring
  • Blake and Blake and the other Blake, it’s a really bleak name
  • It represents your writing, creativity kinda lame
  • You need the spark, stop writing like your dark your not
  • You still some kid that goes to school
  • Worry bout your grades before you take up something great
  • Like fighting greats like me Vertical we spit on your face
  • You still have to experience feelings
  • Feelings which are demeaning
  • Like when you feel your parents are demand
  • Like when you feel there is no meaning
  • Like when you feel you are defeat
  • Like when you feel the word depression
  • *click clack*
  • Death inside of here
  • Express excitement
  • Like I presented fear
  • Fear in the eyes of queers
  • Fear that lets them know rap is for top tiers

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • In ya last “rap” you said you would let another man suck on ya feet, why in god’s name?
  • How you call ya self Vertical? Ya lines ain’t exactly what I would call straight
  • Think a 50s diner when I’m spittin fire, gettin plates when I’m back in the booth
  • Guess it’s a Vertical battle for both of us, an uphill battle for you
  • You just another clone my shit is real if you in the field then please just stay out there
  • I‘ve seen so many sets of these vertical lines, but I always got the angles to break down squares
  • When I get live I’m just on a different stage fact you think ya shit is good just sends me into a rage
  • What I spit is insane, it’s in the name, I bet you think you in the hood cause of the pic on ya page
  • Just cause you got copied from so many don’t even try and divvy the blame
  • Leave em hangin up against the wall, take the hammer and ya mental picture gets framed
  • Get scissor kicked while ya girl’s clitoris get pistol whipped with this dick
  • How you “learn rap from Assassin’s“ and still ain’t even killin shit?
  • I got the drive to bark on em like I cruise the whip from Dumb and Dumber
  • While you out here havin close battles with user with a bunch of numbers
  • I’m the type to fuck you up then check ya silhouette, ya bars got no structure so I ain’t got any interest
  • I guess that in the end it all shapes out to be a verse where two Vertical lines never intersect
  • This is the worst rhyme scheme ever, but I still got bars man, this may be some bizarre math
  • But it all adds up, if you Vertical, then I’m a fuckin BAR graph
  • You took the door into Mordor, you walkin to ya death
  • While I got vertical’s whore horizontal on the bed
  • I been cutthroat when I cut throats of those who so much as mumble, you young folks hidin in the gun smoke
  • “I saw M-Savage as a king and Maverick as God” bitch I just battled em back to back and won both
  • Now what does that make me when I spin you on ya head like a breakdancer
  • Do I still need to impress you? Fuck those rules, how you Vertical with no straight answers?
  • You put the ass in “I learn rap from Assassain’s” I put the dick in ya mother
  • Plus that’s grammatically incorrect, ok now back to talkin bout killin each other
  • You named ya intro Introduction? Damn you elevatin the game, that’s really somethin!
  • Turn em to a vegetable, got em droppin tiers when I cut em like the skin of onions
  • Then finger fuck ya girl with a chicken cutlet and make her go sleep in the oven
  • Heat up ya noodle just to blow off steam like it’s a dumpling, nobody got ya back so quit the frontin
  • Makin noise to leave em shook like a Kirby move, on the bed I make ya girlie do the curly cue
  • Just these bars gave you a Scarface, with these dope lines I done murdered you in ‘32

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