Battles Maverick vs lyricswriter
RULES
Use an old written you wrote a year or more ago, any topic. Even if it's cringe, I wrote this in September of 2015. Show your growth! GL.
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Finding my weakness is like finding a needle in a haystack,
- Look in the wheat pile,
- It's next to the people tied up on the train track,
- Meanwhile...
- I lay back and still bleak style,
- You get paid to rap? Haha
- I heard Meek Mill's freestyle,
- You're career will fade to black if you don't seek skill and be wild,
- And be willing to be mild,
- For a moment until you catch your momentum thrown at you,
- But I hold it still and attack with chosen weapons pointed at you,
- I swallow a pill and Alas! I'm poisoned, infested, and annoyed with your attitude!
- But I'm very busy good job on the serendipity,
- So good luck man...
- Break a leg, but can you jump back from the pain of a sprain?
- I'm fuckin' mad this rage and angst is somethin' that creates a strange but loving path to rearranged plains,
- Yeah I'm moving mountains and proving to thousands that I'm concluding the outcome,
- Booming the loud stuff while pursuing an album and mooning with my butt out, but...
- I found a dingleberry in your mouth bruh,
- You're just a little fairy sprinkling down dust...
- "You're so down to Earth,"/
- But my head is in the clouds and universe/
- Space cadetin' without facial expression, but my feet are planted;
- To the dirt/ Superb
- Found common ground with severed; legs/
- Like a mermaid I was drowning, but adapted in every way/
- My birthday was a solitudinous outing, dramatic renegade/
- My world changed in voluminous loud scenes, compassion
- All this passion and adrenaline makes me feel like Manson and Edison;
- I'm killing the mic/
- With static electric my gasket is pressurin', spilling, and might crash into a letter pit/
- I'll go manic on the exorcist and stab 'em in the neckerchief, killing, he died but neved lived/
DEFENDER'S RAP
- knock knock
- see the clock
- there is no time left
- to be depressed
- be the captain of your ship
- don't just worship
- start your hardship
- everything happens for a reason
- Simple genius, go hard and spit bits of semen
- getting a editor ,getting a producer
- fuck them instead
- generate your self as a editor
- and make your savings your producer
- wheather u are winner or loser
- it does not matter
- being a rapper
- control your anger and let the faster of your spirit
- fuck them