Battles vs UmbilicalCord
RULES
No cursing, No racial slurs, Must be a real flow. Must be longer than 25 lines.
Max of 50 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- What ever happened to the rap game seriously
- None of you stepping up to the plate lyrically
- You want money and fame and you want it all quickly
- But didn't learn to appreciate this arts history
- Takes more than a strange story to be a rap, beatnik
- Let me tell you 'bout a time when I was not rapping
- Blahsy blah and yeah its all good it's on the beat, Nick
- Telling a story, fitting the beat with rhyming words
- That's still unique enough to get your story heard
- Cursing less, using real words, spoken clearly not slurred
- build the community up how's that for a standard
- A great hook and wicked beat don't mean much without the words
- Think about that if you are trying to sell hit records
- Give our lyrical art the respect it deserves
- All the hate that you're spitting moving all of us backwards
- Violence, drugs and crime try to make it sound sublime
- Not talking from the perspective of your upward climb
- Dissing every other artist with all your lines
- Focus on growing this artwork by taking the time
- Takes more than a strange story to be a rap, beatnik
- Let me tell you 'bout a time when I was not rapping
- Blahsy blah and ya its all good its on the beat, Nick
- Poetically, challenging do it lyrically
- Take time, write your best lines, good rhymes, spit them clearly
- The message I'm saying, amazing, rhythmically
- Flame, diss me but do it while rhyming lyrically