Battles  Oddzilla vs Lioncub

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • Iconic colic - my third eye blue like bonnets
  • ever since Im embryonic I been on it
  • Swear for the longest I was oh so haunted
  • overlooked discarded impoverished and unwanted
  • En-guarde bombarded with that ol I'm retarded
  • May I Retort-may I get started my heart has hardened
  • Heartship - Has art as a large part of it
  • Smart ass shit started converting confirming
  • Con-curing kind of concerning conserving
  • Converging hardly to sharply largely to sparsley
  • Stop! no arguing don't get me started see or I be
  • Mumbling rumbling harmonies humming cutting arteries
  • Punishing heartstrings so it seems my only hobby
  • - killing em calmly
  • While I'm gardening
  • High carbon spring
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  • Logically We're learning these hoes biology
  • Wiley Coyote singing Cervantes sardonically
  • Exhausted he earning his whole biography
  • Live in Nairobi rhythmic malaise harmony
  • for money (x2)
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  • Me Mean Mr. Joe Green screams so hard through the embers
  • Gee I'm thoughtlessly gone until, thru and all throughout November
  • Why Be? I cant remember
  • Huh I partied til the darkness was a part of me like tenure
  • Pardon me sir "What do you see me as in ten years?"
  • Darling miss here "See what you do to me after ten beers!"
  • Promise if you start with me then we'll be departing here
  • No warning mon just straight into thenmartyrdom
  • A dummy among men, a whore a charlatan
  • Hardly a harlequin hahaha no bargaining
  • Mumbling wanna-bees always be start something
  • You gotta be smart if you blind goin all in
  • To start with I've murdered many minute men
  • Thats why first off I'm heren you ain't never heard of them
  • The Vermin’s Twin furtherin tradition with my learned kin
  • I'm here again walk down the hall go tell a friend
  • this ain't The Doors I ain’t your mom this ain't The End
  • everyone has a dead homie or two my friend
  • RIP Malcom McCormick peace to his moms and them
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  • Since birth I serve absurdly perfect words and they deserve a fee,
  • Observantly every nerdy new-bee all like "who is he"
  • Regardless be discarded by the disregarding oddity
  • New property probably a balcony of mahogany
  • Carpentry in the armory Ivory pottery,
  • Pardon me misspelling shit was never hard for me
  • Im starving and smelling you ain't that hard to read
  • Audibly I am regarded as remarkably
  • Hardly left Harvard then I won the fucking lottery
  • Rhyme scheme known to start preponderantly
  • Please pass another piece of parchment B
  • Don't quit or get disheartened and uh, excuse my parlance
  • But I am about to be up in your sweethearts garments
  • She singing sweetly smelling something like my armpits
  • Mixed with a whiff of dick split betwixt the squadrons
  • Shit I mixed up I been sworn in under swords of King Solomon
  • Retreat re-read it until it clicks it ain't no argument
  • regardless if you heard or not welcome to your disarmament
  • cause every body got dead homies I ain't started it
  • everybody got dead homies mine you don't start with

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Put a muzzle on a pusspop so shit don't pop Outta that pus
  • I tried that and shit didn't go down so good except the juice
  • Aint no warning for the danger she attacked without a sign
  • Saw it from a mile away and still got caught with the right
  • Shits gettin old bang nine to five for the papes
  • The clocks broken Auld Lang Syne from 1788
  • Time stops for one(1) moment and forty(40) days pass with debris
  • Three(3) mistakes cost this fucked up broken lock with no key?
  • Slam her down the marbles broke and lost like it's pieces
  • I lost my marbles and I thought I profited from onyx
  • Your trapped in your circle trynna chase your own tail
  • The more deadlier the pace with which I profit your fail
  • These crappers are like hobnails they stay strapped to my brogues
  • I can't get rid of them they're part of my outfit in the roads
  • And say I'm washed up if you wanna see a bigger flame
  • I'm a carbide in disguise so water is my friend in the game
  • Will a whisper of wizzle knock over a nut or just kill it?
  • A will-o-wisp in the mix'll knock out all these in a minute.

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