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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Dear God,
- Have you ever seen the all shit that I went through,You aint even the one to vent to
- I hope this makes sense too, try to make attempts to pick up the pen, do i even intend to ?
- I look up to you all the time and cry to look at a reflection of my whole life,
- While I'm screaming at myself to layover and die, but why ? God why ? you told me to try.
- I know i messed up my life a few times so lord take me as I am for I'm just another man
- I deal with sadness & I deal with past mistakes I've made where i've crashed & burned like 9/11
- So imma go pray to God about it seems like we gotta go through hell in order to go to heaven
- I can't take this pain anymore just take me away you put me on layaway
- My hearts at the point where it's going to break I have a funny fucking feeling that your fake
- Fuck God, fuck Saints, fuck a Holy Book, fuck the present,fuck the future
- Wishin that in my future that i could find Heaven sooner
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Out of this coviction of feelings
- I'ma get this girl that be stuffin my bricks
- Pac said fuck the world and i ain't come yet
- Insidious feelings of dread
- And you my nigga tho, no hard feelings
- Weight stand out like pimples and cold-sore lips
- Got a nigga seein things
- Words cannot describe my feelings
- So i guess that's where i hide my things
- For real niggas who ain't got no feelings
- Rich, 2pac and the click, smokin' blunts, loadin' clips
- I'm so deeply sorry for hurting your feelings,
- Dont judge me ...its my feelings
- This is how she want to live
- With feelings that we're dry
- When that thing gon fly