Battles Atreus vs bloodclarter
RULES
Lesson time - 25 lines max
Max of 25 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- " LEAD IM DISPENSING THE WEAPON MY SENTENCE!!!!"
- Ok pause... lead on paper ? its called graphite to be dispensin that pencil has to be mechanical
- Think virgin with a gangrene his pen is/penis green need to grow up mother nature think botanical
- This kats high on hisself catnip too tangible look bud your barely passable
- Its time we'd/weed look past you one line proves you wacker
- Get it? Weed Whacker this violence stems to this new green leaf
- No beef pedal/petal to the metal thats a riding lawnmower chief
- Ain't talkin lawn clippins when you catch blades a bloody motif
- No clarter/clotter to stop a bloody flow fist up I still give em the lumps
- This is a quick lesson on structure kid :
- Don't do long paragraphs use multis and humor prepare the laughs
- Build a scheme keep the same theme about 4 bars keep it clean
- Wordplay is a match to gasoline punchlines keep em mean
- Example : Your structure is terrible mask it I wanna scream like kids in a haunted house on halloween
- I'm bein keen ya name has the word bloody your style needs a re-vamp
- It sucks so much think hickeys I'm at ya neck your trash category heres the stamp
- Bloody knows/nose knockout punch scamp
- Its bloody any card I eat on when I put my mark thats food stamps
- I may have gotten sick your one of few battles back I'm still the same
- Against anyone its A game its a fucking shame
- I see all these wannabe's claim they one of the best with no success
- But im pretty progressive I insure I give em lessons
- Get it? Progressive insurance protect the drive now any questions?
DEFENDER'S RAP
- fuck the all seeing eye, your all reading lies, you try to galvanise people who be following your sentences,
- and then search for meaning with the verse that your speaking with shit symbolical references,
- you got a alot of wins but im not impressed by it, my written hitting heavy like christians killing many innocent children on missionary assignments,
- dont say your poetic, what you say is generic, like your profile pic, your a docile kid who uses rap pads rhyme generator for literary devices,
- talking bout literary devices lets start with allusion...
- its supposed to be an indirect reference to momentarily see past the confusion, but not describe the reference in its entirety like your misfired shots you tried to fire at me,
- you cant find the target but i can find the irony, your a euphemism for someone whos career is computer driven and my diction is friction,
- i go lengths to ensure im winning like olympic swimming, im torturing this contorted abortion my thoughts flawless,
- why is my ego big? its a chain reaction you cant contain the damage when i aim i brandish then i reload quick, i need more endorphins,
- so what you want with blood clarter, your a dumb bastard im alot smarter like im from harvard but with real life experiences,
- yh im a paragraph warrior putting pathological liars in catacombs im the coroner cause in comments you suck dick and hide with your appearances,
- im fly your no where near this sick, ima flight with no clearances, talent with no censorship, battle me your regretting it, i diss a kid and make a bitch go missing like mysterious disappearances,
- your battle bars are hilaroius, talking bout "internal rhyming sittin wit satan infernal dinin pentagram aligning"
- let me flip that....your words declining slitting with blades my verse enlightened so you can stay hell bound like a murdered pilot in the middle of turbulence flying,
- verses this titan, you couldnt stand face to face with me, ive been waiting patiently but once a year ill sun this queer like the earths alignment,
- that will give you enough time to try find some good punchlines so thats your first assignment,
- having to be creative without being able to write corny references is your worst environment,
- with your double entendre you gotta come harder, i see through you on my third eye shit you cant be fighting this,
- and all the lyrics that your spitting are typical of fiction just an imaginary character but you have to face Excalibur im slashing with my blade putting Atreus in graves,
- your not facinating as a challenger, saying your gonna smoke this fool, 25 lines wassnt nothing why you wrote these rules, you put up a smoke screen to avoid detection but your devoid with no voice or message,
- like your recorded voice you took down cause you couldnt deal with the pressure of needing to be better, but you'd rather pretend to act humble while your act crumbles,