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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Mama, please don't you cry, I'm sorry
- I just caught some time, I'll be home soon
- It won't be long, I promise
- I will be okay, just wipe those
- Tears off of your face, I'm sorry
- I won't right my wrongs, I'm guilty
- Lord, have mercy, please forgive me
- Mama, please don't you cry, I'm sorry
- One hundred and forty-five days, I'm counting
- Tryna hold on but the time goes slowly
- Two hundred and twenty-five ice cold showers
- Hurricane hit my cell, ain't get no power
- Tryna walk a narrow straight path is a battle
- Kinda hard to walk when you're chained in shackles
- My soul bleeds through these four walls
- My heart aches after phone calls
- Mama, please don't you cry, I'm sorry
- I just caught some time, I'll be home soon
- It won't be long, I promise
- I will be okay, just wipe those
- Tears off of your face, I'm sorry
- I won't right my wrongs, I'm guilty
- Lord, have mercy, please forgive me
- Mama, please don't you cry, I'm sorry
- Give you my heart that's filled with pain
- Give me my freedom
- Take off these shackles, they hurt my hands
- Let me go home
- Cold shower, cold bath, cold food, cold slab
- Only makes a cold heart
- Cold shower, cold slab, cold food, cold bath
- Only makes a cold
- Mama, please don't you cry, I'm sorry
- I just caught some time, I'll be home soon
- It won't be long, I promise
- I will be okay, just wipe those
- Tears off of your face, I'm sorry
- I won't right my wrongs, I'm guilty
- Lord, have mercy, please forgive me
- Mama, please don't you cry, I'm sorry
- Mama, please don't you cry, I'm sorry
- Barbed wire, best friend became the barbed wire (barbed wire)
- Chains broken by the barbed wire (barbed wire)
- Tears dropping from the barbed wire (barbed wire, falling down, barbed wire)
- Cold shower, cold slab, cold food, cold bath (yeah, falling down)
- Only makes a cold heart
DEFENDER'S RAP
- I’m a zebra, no stripes
- It’s not my fault I’m white like a zebra, no stripes !
- I’m a Cali boy and I shaped out right !
- Focused on my education and communication between my family and my life which will never turn out right !
- Got a noose around my neck now !
- Got me feelin like I’m tied down !
- Gotta sacrifice my life for the greater good of my feelings now !
- Maybe I should make this quicker, put a gun to my head and make the last thing I hear
- Blow !
- Next thing I know I’m in heaven, knees weak, kneeling for forgiveness !
- Daring to ask the very being that sacrificed his life so I didn’t do stuff like this for a second chance
- NO !
- Next thing I know I’m in hell, knees weak, I regret asking for forgiveness !
- I regret having this illness which prevents me from preventing thinking of things like killing !
- Fuck It ! I regret being religious !
- No !
- Next thing I know I’m in a hospital, knees weak, I regret not being religious, In a few weeks I’ll regret seeing the stitches on the right side of my brain concealing all of my pain, remindin myself of all the shit going on in head
- God ! Why didn’t you just put me to bed, leave my soul to rest, and create the next ill minded being that will soon follow my steps and end his life, like the thousands of those before him
- God ! Just put me to bed !
- Next thing I know, I’m in bed, knees weak, grateful for life.
- It was all a bad dream,
- I woke up hit a couple of snoots said good morning to my dead mama, put the gun to the back of my brain cocked it back, it went
- Boom !