Battles  mrspuuunge vs babysupreme

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I've been noticing threats woven
  • closer than ever known
  • within of my own soul
  • deeply knit in my DNA
  • ancient hyroglyphically chiseled code
  • its been inscribed in a brittle stone
  • an inevitable final blow
  • thats been stirring inside my skeleton keeping my mind eye full
  • of the clouds that hang over head
  • preventing my forward motion
  • left welded in past and woe
  • the selfishness burned to ashes
  • the embettered present I couldve known
  • but to focus upon the failures and forget about all the hope
  • is a time length of limitations left placed on myself in whole
  • synthetically forming nature left pressing on every bone
  • but the perfectionist that was growing was spreading a black smoke
  • and the pity of self distorted pollution under the rug
  • blissfully ignorant but a crutch
  • and the longer youve worn facades makes it harder to let em go
  • but the temporary strength that I congered from wrongful sources
  • only perforated supports that exposures would force to fall
  • consciously looking for my opponents just to battle and mop the floor
  • was the source of the failures constantly only lowering my performance
  • now I forgive my nemesis becoming their friends before
  • I thought that their form of presence what something so wrong abhorrent
  • the volatile thoughts that coursed haunting my conscience just causing shortage
  • the electrical pulses swarmed and impulsiively I ignored them
  • when really the problem forcing a biased opinion formed
  • was the reason that I was dying becomming a walking corpse
  • and even though past is rubble untouchable its important
  • to take all the hostile words the apocolypse and the wars
  • but instead importing vengeance from the obstacles anchored firm
  • its better to take a lesson or a subsequent feeling of warmth
  • for the blizzardous storms ive walked through and exited from before
  • are miserable on the surface but diggin farther below
  • is a world of other emotions ive overlooked them before
  • but taking note of surrounding and really lookin in depth you boar
  • throught the sediments and the bedrocks to a better a softer core
  • I created these lawless monsters and projected their egos first
  • then blamed the world for my failures and assumed as a martyr burned
  • the whirlwinds that overturned opportunity threw to hearse
  • where the jaws that then started chewing and refusing to lift this curse
  • and forgiving myself and others but solely working upon me first
  • was the road to my destination without the need for detours
  • more determined and motivated to speak to you through these words
  • left tethered adhered together and spit out in every verse
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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • My homegirl nova helping get me over the fact that Maybe you should quit thinking about them candy bar and think about spittin some real bars
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  • Let me tell you whos in charge
  • I'm the king so get on your knees and bow down to me
  • Do you even know what the fuck your doing here
  • You should have listened to your piers when they said you wouldn't make it if you want this smoke come and take it. just like those rednecks who say it and all yall hate it but it's not my fault yall cant take it. and yall be saying that y'all swangin but lust be hangin and not even gangin can't even bang a chick so yall havin a to bang a yall own stick. ill pull up with the extended clip ill air that bitch out then dip
  • You aint bout yo shit quit flappin them gums you aint shit but a bum.

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