Battles Pheilpay vs MindInPieces
RULES
Be about a break
Max of 27 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Villainous I be killing this
- Smack ya girl, be too childish
- Her fire, too mildish
- Never get mrs. It's always a swish
- Throw back that Judas kiss, you too devilish
- You say you love him, but everyone hates Chris
- This ain't even a diss, just hoping you end up in the abyss
- No justice for a young boy, no more guns for a young McCoy
- Everyday you done annoy, I still stuck with you, this ain't any decoy
- Running with pain, searching for joy, why your name gotta be stinking joy
- You done bombed this convoy, why the sad song plays the cowboy
- Replace a rider, with a new toy.
- Playboy leather, playing like you too cleaver
- Looking in your eyes, this love was nuclear, must be why it blew up
- The past got you stuck, got me uneasy in the stomach
- Too much of this drug, screw it, take some more havoc
- Burning these memories to manage, can't manage this damage
- You were 21, you turned me to a savage
- Locking you up in this suitcase of your baggage.
- Scared of getting a disease, bitch you are the disease
- Squeeze for the peace, better run when my pain will unleash
- Love is for dummies, why so much suicide in these countries
- Sick searching for you, you all some zombies, breaking me be your hobbies
- Knocking you out in first round, bumping my heart on that surround sound
- Every word be sword, oh so profound, this one's for you, lean in for another round.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- I must be mistaken, did I say to create a rap about a Break-Up?
- I can't even gain some definition what you said is plain dumb?
- So lay on your great thumb, and twiddle and listen
- To my literal spitting, and criticism, of your illiterate lyrics.
- I take a vacation, is that what you meant to say son,
- when you made a statement to write in relation to breaks huh?
- Man, I would take one if I had made such a lame song, as Your Love
- or Oo Ee, stupid name, call it foo-e, cause I wave it, it's too cheap.
- And I am greater than you'd be if Jaden Smith gave you his looseleaf.
- Furthermore, have you heard of boar? It's a type of pig.
- It's also me, add a "D", when I have to listen to your writing.
- The intelligence level resembles a seven-year-old.
- Your grammar is stupid like someone slammed your neurons
- And jammed, with a toothpick, your two cents, and too, your sense
- of what can be credited as, and said to be music.
- 27 lines, no, Heaven's my home, cause compared to the loser first,
- I come across looking like a divine phantom, you'd be cursed.
- Take your pants home, they're sagging. I took your belt, as a rap king.
- Even fax machine, Eminem, when he rapped his own track called Relapse it's.
- Real bad, I feel that rhyming sight twice in my eyes doesn't provide king status.
- Seven lines left, I'd guess you find that I already won this, my head
- is above his, I'm divine, your under, I see why, you hunger
- To beat guys, but disqualifying cause the rules you write I can't under-
- Stand, after this you'll be my first fan, cause you stay till Thursday
- Reading my body of work to gain, any knowledge on how to make
- Great lyrics. For a second battle, my schedule I have cleared, then.