Battles  user334187465 vs Atreus

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Lover's Lane
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  • come apart as you can be
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  • fragrance till the Honey bee;
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  • strike out fancy to an opened door
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  • drawn away any terror by a two face whore
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  • clean up the notion of a cry for more
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  • lover's Lane
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  • picture a perfect minnow down at the local country store
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  • fill up the honor to let go before
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  • lift hi the skull of the American dream
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  • simplistic statement a cry for more

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Once a full moon shine , each a star in design
  • Light breaks unto each heart , But love is but Bogart
  • Sooth me dagger unto my bleeding heart
  • Close the chapter , Bound by fate as if a captor
  • As we age we evolve and realize we are the adaptor
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  • Human nature as fragile as Pane Glass , Battle wounds make scars amass
  • We all unto death en masse , Seperated by birth and social class
  • By age and Gender , To wealth and poverty we surrender
  • Some Succeed and Find Splendor , Others Mask pain and live as a pretender
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  • Lifes full of mystery and Intrigue , We live until deaths Fatigue
  • Sickness , Misery and Pain unto humanity like a blitzkrieg

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