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about: something Tragic in your life max 24 lines No cursing

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Sitting alone in the haunting darkness, as the torturous thoughts creep into his mind
  • He's in disbelief because she was never that type until he stumbled into her room to find
  • her body's a bloody mess because the attempt of suicide gone correctly
  • without any hesitation, she put the gun with the loaded chamber pointing directly
  • to her head, one pull of the trigger and she'd be dead
  • she knew this decision she would regret, but she pulled the trigger and turned her carpet red
  • I called her a couple of times that night, she never picked up
  • I arrived there in the morning, shook her but she never woke up
  • She left us mourning, I'm in tears, in disbelief
  • I'm all alone on a rooftop, looking down in grief
  • I'm kneeling at the side of my bed praying she's found peace
  • Stumbling over my own two feet, trying to pick up every piece
  • of my shattered heart
  • I mistreated her, and I knew it, too late to apologize now that she's given up cause I tore her apart
  • I look on her bureau to find a suicide note
  • specifically to me, hand wrote
  • stating she was sorry but she lost hope
  • she was too emotionally low that she couldn't cope

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • So, my story is about my dog who years ago have died,
  • She was a good dog, she lightened my self-esteem and life
  • Let me explain it clearly, but for that we'll have to rewind...
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  • So, my mom came with a surprise, she got us a female dog
  • At that time, I didn't really got too much attached to her
  • My family loved that dog, from what I seen and heard
  • I didn't get to play too much with her, because of schoolwork
  • I had an unstable mental health, due to some bullying jerks
  • For that I hated myself, they'd attack me with verbal words
  • One day, coming to home, crying on my room because of them
  • My dog came in, and she just fulfilled my faith
  • She made me comfortable,I felt so true joy unlike nowadays
  • Felt like my problems and anxiety just started to fade
  • Ever since, the dog would be around me and together we played
  • I felt so happy and ignored my problems, it made my days
  • But one day, she was recently diagnosed with a disease
  • She vomited and had a fever to high degrees
  • We took her to the vet to see if they could help her
  • We stayed there for hours to hoping she is fine
  • The dog had a fatal disease, therefore we spent the whole day
  • To enjoy while it lasts, until her clock is ticking to her grave
  • We all cried when she died, now she's in a better place...

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