Battles  JxckMxxdy vs Rico

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Same subject as me (Deep/Depression etc..) but maybe stay a bit jokey (like my last line)...NO CURSING.

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I say they're trying to attention seek
  • When all they do is say how their life is bleak
  • How they feel so mixed up and swimming in emotion
  • Feeling like they're drowning in a deep empty ocean
  • But it gets to nights like this, it's never nice like this on a night like this
  • The nights like this that just dig at your inside
  • Your mind laughing at you because you cried
  • "Imagine if your friends at school knew you'd cried"
  • Deep inside you've already died
  • Killed by the one thing keeping you alive
  • But on the outside we stay strong, strong enough to survive.
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  • The sudden suicide of a legendary actor
  • Depression being the biggest factor
  • He put on a smile and made us all laugh
  • But he was headed down an awful path
  • So I realise, and I sympathise
  • With the people who say those lies
  • The lies like, "I'm fine"
  • When really they lack that shine
  • That smile and laugh they had when they were fine
  • So I apologise if I've said something rude
  • When you've not been in the best mood
  • But trust me you're not screwed
  • Because I'm here for you, whether it be for a hug, a chat, or a nude;)

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • They try to paint the picture on the bad guy,well i aint a bad guy,
  • they tell me that i live for nothing,i fight back in my mind,
  • i know that im living for something i look back at my child,
  • only enough time to glance her a smile,
  • I hope god can take me before i do something too wrong,
  • im giving up like i been holding on for too long.
  • i wake up to the fire at my door.blaze up,
  • to get higher and soar. meanwhile, im trynna fight for your cause,
  • and all i ever get is countless nights with my god,
  • i pause i pray,the only thing that keep me calm,other than these broads and haze,
  • well really i guess its hard to say,it seems like everytime i find an easy route,
  • it just become the harder way,never new my daddy and the second nigga that fatherd me,
  • hauled away,so im trynna be someone i never had,
  • i know its a lil hard to understand the situation,
  • but i was never mad
  • i been thinking the same thing since i was old enough to contemplate them,
  • i know you remember me telling you that.
  • but those thoughts they come and they go,lately my mind been stuck on the goals,
  • but id hate to think id live long enough,
  • in this hatefull place, that ill have to start planning my survival,
  • i sigh slow,slide low ,but death the only thing we know
  • thats how it go.think about it,
  • not one mfer special,death gone take us all,
  • your soul and your vessel.and these mfers selling they soul to the devil,

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