Battles  Communist_Doing_Deeds vs Wonder_Rap

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • (Now, think about your life right now and how it's going for you
  • I mean, how's it going? Is it going well? Is it going bad?
  • I mean, are you working all the time?
  • Are you not having any fun? Are you, uh, missing out?
  • Uh, is there passion in your life or are you just going through the motions?)
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  • Uh, yo, and I constantly get hate
  • But, up inside the game
  • The hypocrisy is raised
  • We went from real music to Broccoli being played
  • Yo, 'Pac would be disgraced
  • If he knew the music changed
  • Is it me, or is it just a phony?
  • Following the orders of what the system has told me
  • Low key, I don't wanna live life lonely
  • But, every girl fucked me over with one of my homies
  • Man, so what you know about anxiety?
  • Popping pills to stop the pills to struggle with it quietly
  • How am I supposed to raise a child in this society
  • Knowing damn well he's gonna toss away sobriety?
  • 'Cause I did and shit, I'm only thirteen
  • Thought of myself as nothin', but seen happiness ain't guarantee
  • Living a life that is a bear bare with the misery
  • Y'all don't know the half of what depression really did to me
  • Staying up at night, wondering if I was good enough
  • They said I'm the bomb, if it's true, then I would erupt
  • Obviously not, 'cause I stopped where I shouldn't of
  • Honestly, I'm not a God, the problem is we look above
  • But, what if God shared the Earth with the humans
  • And seen every tactical method that we're abusin'
  • And heard every lyrical melody in our music
  • To learn more about the human brain than what we're losin'
  • They always said that Satan had a lot of tricks
  • So, what if Satan's God and he taught us how to live?
  • Yo, that would mean that right is wrong
  • And all along, we've been praisin'
  • The wrong God and thrown into Hell's pit, so shit
  • Yo, that's my high mind talkin'
  • Deadman walkin'
  • Livin' life while in the coffin
  • I'll never sell out just to make a fucking profit
  • These autotune rappers sounding like the Stephen Hawkin
  • I got a statement that is kinda hypothetic
  • The rhyme is good, but how you rhyme pathetic
  • Yo, I don't get it, on how you even made it this far
  • While mumbling with pitch corrections, never spitting a bar
  • Yo, I'm a young rapper, with the mind of a zone
  • So fuck a label, I can do it better when I'm alone
  • 'Cause if I sign, then I'll turn my fucking passion to stone
  • I don't need a team of eight just for my rapping to grow
  • It's like all that I've known
  • Has vanished into the air
  • But, I've been dealing with pain
  • So all my lyrics compare
  • To all the real fucking tragedies that happened this year
  • So, find your passion instead of smoking' and sippin' a beer

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • Babygirl lets start from the top.
  • Babygirl why did you stop
  • Babygirl are you ok
  • Babygirl we need to talk
  • Babygirl why don't you stay
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  • Did I do something wrong, why won't you talk,
  • do you love me or not.
  • Why won't you stay a night to talk.
  • Babygirl why won't you stay a night to talk Babygirl x2
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  • Babygirl I know I did you wrong, but
  • The past is in the past babygirl I am so sorry.
  • Babygirl you are my heart I can't run without you on my mind twenty-four sev.
  • Babygirl I am so sorry
  • Babygirl I love you a lot
  • Babygirl I am here to stay.
  • One more chance
  • Please come back my way.

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