Battles Communist_Doing_Deeds vs Wonder_Rap
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- (Now, think about your life right now and how it's going for you
- I mean, how's it going? Is it going well? Is it going bad?
- I mean, are you working all the time?
- Are you not having any fun? Are you, uh, missing out?
- Uh, is there passion in your life or are you just going through the motions?)
- Uh, yo, and I constantly get hate
- But, up inside the game
- The hypocrisy is raised
- We went from real music to Broccoli being played
- Yo, 'Pac would be disgraced
- If he knew the music changed
- Is it me, or is it just a phony?
- Following the orders of what the system has told me
- Low key, I don't wanna live life lonely
- But, every girl fucked me over with one of my homies
- Man, so what you know about anxiety?
- Popping pills to stop the pills to struggle with it quietly
- How am I supposed to raise a child in this society
- Knowing damn well he's gonna toss away sobriety?
- 'Cause I did and shit, I'm only thirteen
- Thought of myself as nothin', but seen happiness ain't guarantee
- Living a life that is a bear bare with the misery
- Y'all don't know the half of what depression really did to me
- Staying up at night, wondering if I was good enough
- They said I'm the bomb, if it's true, then I would erupt
- Obviously not, 'cause I stopped where I shouldn't of
- Honestly, I'm not a God, the problem is we look above
- But, what if God shared the Earth with the humans
- And seen every tactical method that we're abusin'
- And heard every lyrical melody in our music
- To learn more about the human brain than what we're losin'
- They always said that Satan had a lot of tricks
- So, what if Satan's God and he taught us how to live?
- Yo, that would mean that right is wrong
- And all along, we've been praisin'
- The wrong God and thrown into Hell's pit, so shit
- Yo, that's my high mind talkin'
- Deadman walkin'
- Livin' life while in the coffin
- I'll never sell out just to make a fucking profit
- These autotune rappers sounding like the Stephen Hawkin
- I got a statement that is kinda hypothetic
- The rhyme is good, but how you rhyme pathetic
- Yo, I don't get it, on how you even made it this far
- While mumbling with pitch corrections, never spitting a bar
- Yo, I'm a young rapper, with the mind of a zone
- So fuck a label, I can do it better when I'm alone
- 'Cause if I sign, then I'll turn my fucking passion to stone
- I don't need a team of eight just for my rapping to grow
- It's like all that I've known
- Has vanished into the air
- But, I've been dealing with pain
- So all my lyrics compare
- To all the real fucking tragedies that happened this year
- So, find your passion instead of smoking' and sippin' a beer
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Babygirl lets start from the top.
- Babygirl why did you stop
- Babygirl are you ok
- Babygirl we need to talk
- Babygirl why don't you stay
- Did I do something wrong, why won't you talk,
- do you love me or not.
- Why won't you stay a night to talk.
- Babygirl why won't you stay a night to talk Babygirl x2
- Babygirl I know I did you wrong, but
- The past is in the past babygirl I am so sorry.
- Babygirl you are my heart I can't run without you on my mind twenty-four sev.
- Babygirl I am so sorry
- Babygirl I love you a lot
- Babygirl I am here to stay.
- One more chance
- Please come back my way.