Battles Christian_Lanes vs freeyc_youngche
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
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- Love is spiritual, complex not just physical
- When you left it was death, my world veiw was cynical
- Hurtin too was miserable, ta think of yous habitual
- Critical condition, listen thats literal
- Ta think of yous medicinal, writing letters ta mail
- My passion has me trapped in, as in federal jail
- The letters never sent, guess my sentiments failed
- Yes i'm sensin betrayal, because we seperated
- Never made it i'm amazed still, because she's educated
- More than me importantly, shes dedicated
- Now my hearts decimated, to thee extremity
- Yes im sick in the head, and theres no remedy
- Shes a heavenly entity, thats all honesty
- Most men treat girl frinds, like a commodity
- Sayin lies from male pride, and hypocrisy
- Our love is deep as this abyss, or philosophy