Battles Yvng_Javi vs Dope_Doc
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- damn, we used to look up at the sky and reminisce,
- before ur eyes closed and u fell in the unceasing abyss,
- I woulda seen it comin if i had perception of shit,
- why did he did he pull it on you, fuck it im ended that bitch,
- some lady told u to hold on, i was so distraught i couldnt handle it,
- saw 4 shits in your body, shit left me expression-less,
- i was bout to pull it out a drop em,
- but he got away during the commotion and shit,
- my niggas wanted to find him, but it wont bring u back, so fuck it
- manz i could see u scared, got shot and confused.
- maybe he was crazy, all the drugs he abused,
- it was hard telling your what happened to u,
- nigga i wish i was u, and u was in my shoe,
- u were blowin up, and i still aint had a clue,
- but imma keep tryin, cuz thats what u would do,
- i wish u could keep fighting, why did god take u from are crew,
- you were going somewhere, i didnt think it was heavens gates up there,
- i had to look your grandma in the eye,
- she cried in my arms sayin"lord take me there",
- lookin back on us chillin, now the wind chillin without u here,
- i can fight my battles, but this one got my vision blurry, shit aint clear,
- wish u would come back ta me, like the pull of earths gravity,
- and now i dont feel safe, the drugs they keep on draggin me.
- i wanna be with u bro, hope an op empties a mag in me
- no suffering, i dont wanna die slowly
- now all i do is reminisce about you and me
- R.I.P June Oso
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Nobody can cope with the dope, I'ma go get this rope and pull till it breaks my throat,
- My whole life is a joke, I just want to explode cuz I'm broke, Just want to snort this coke,
- Nobody knows all this pain that hangs from my face, I'll take it out on my veins,
- Triggered by the sound of someone flipping a page all this rage releases from its cage,
- While I'm living in sins and I just want to get recognized for these writtens,
- I'm pissing on chickens who can't take a loss and keep bitching 'n dissing,
- So the doc and his anger enable his strength to choke the life out of strangers,
- Somebody come staple me off a skyscraper, you'll be doing me a huge favor,
- These poets are groaning when Doc is outspoken towards the opposing opponent,
- I offer condolence cuz since I was small every fight that I ended I left it without getting swollen,
- Now people have told me that I am like hulk cuz I can't take a joke that they spoke,
- But I hold onto my notes and just take out this rage onto a table full of coke 'n dope,
- Now these hospitals and therapists were prejudice towards my arrogant view on feminists,
- As an American born in a hood full of venom and, said I'd be dealing drugs to nearby residents,
- Ain't no comparing this shit, I was born with a horn that just mourns till he's bored,
- and the crowd is hearing my metaphors unlocking the door like it's Jurassic World,