Battles  Yvng_Javi vs Dope_Doc

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • damn, we used to look up at the sky and reminisce,
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  • before ur eyes closed and u fell in the unceasing abyss,
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  • I woulda seen it comin if i had perception of shit,
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  • why did he did he pull it on you, fuck it im ended that bitch,
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  • some lady told u to hold on, i was so distraught i couldnt handle it,
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  • saw 4 shits in your body, shit left me expression-less,
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  • i was bout to pull it out a drop em,
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  • but he got away during the commotion and shit,
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  • my niggas wanted to find him, but it wont bring u back, so fuck it
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  • manz i could see u scared, got shot and confused.
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  • maybe he was crazy, all the drugs he abused,
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  • it was hard telling your what happened to u,
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  • nigga i wish i was u, and u was in my shoe,
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  • u were blowin up, and i still aint had a clue,
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  • but imma keep tryin, cuz thats what u would do,
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  • i wish u could keep fighting, why did god take u from are crew,
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  • you were going somewhere, i didnt think it was heavens gates up there,
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  • i had to look your grandma in the eye,
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  • she cried in my arms sayin"lord take me there",
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  • lookin back on us chillin, now the wind chillin without u here,
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  • i can fight my battles, but this one got my vision blurry, shit aint clear,
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  • wish u would come back ta me, like the pull of earths gravity,
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  • and now i dont feel safe, the drugs they keep on draggin me.
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  • i wanna be with u bro, hope an op empties a mag in me
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  • no suffering, i dont wanna die slowly
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  • now all i do is reminisce about you and me
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  • R.I.P June Oso

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Nobody can cope with the dope, I'ma go get this rope and pull till it breaks my throat,
  • My whole life is a joke, I just want to explode cuz I'm broke, Just want to snort this coke,
  • Nobody knows all this pain that hangs from my face, I'll take it out on my veins,
  • Triggered by the sound of someone flipping a page all this rage releases from its cage,
  • While I'm living in sins and I just want to get recognized for these writtens,
  • I'm pissing on chickens who can't take a loss and keep bitching 'n dissing,
  • So the doc and his anger enable his strength to choke the life out of strangers,
  • Somebody come staple me off a skyscraper, you'll be doing me a huge favor,
  • These poets are groaning when Doc is outspoken towards the opposing opponent,
  • I offer condolence cuz since I was small every fight that I ended I left it without getting swollen,
  • Now people have told me that I am like hulk cuz I can't take a joke that they spoke,
  • But I hold onto my notes and just take out this rage onto a table full of coke 'n dope,
  • Now these hospitals and therapists were prejudice towards my arrogant view on feminists,
  • As an American born in a hood full of venom and, said I'd be dealing drugs to nearby residents,
  • Ain't no comparing this shit, I was born with a horn that just mourns till he's bored,
  • and the crowd is hearing my metaphors unlocking the door like it's Jurassic World,

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