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Speak what's on your mind

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THIS BATTLE IS OVER

Anonymous won this battle!

CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • He imagines no ones there
  • He’s standing alone
  • With a pencil and a pen
  • And he’s tryna make a poem
  • He had his plan mapped out
  • He’s staying devoted
  • The views ain’t showing he’s going unnoticed
  • He’s feeling like nobody know em
  • He works hard, his songs he’s promoting
  • He puts in the time but his views ain’t showing
  • He closes his eyes, and try to maintain focus
  • His mind is floating
  • His eyes r glowing
  • Pencil hits the page
  • And he feels like he’s chosen
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  • Words fly off the pencil and onto the page
  • The rhymes getting suspenseful
  • He let’s out his rage on the page , knowing in his brain,
  • if he wants this lifestyle of fame, he’s gonna have to train,
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  • He’s a brainiac, he’s working daily at, writing and fighting,
  • meanwhile his brain reacts, and plainly asks,
  • “Where are these lyrics even go at?”
  • His mind is right, know matter how long he fights, he’ll get no feedback
  • Only if people could see the track,
  • How the rhymes and lyrics pack,
  • Hitting the mind and going SMACK
  • To the face
  • His constantly has to race
  • At a fast pace, always thinking of his last days, but he knows there will be bad days
  • It’s just the fact that his songs ain’t bad, it’s just a different taste!
  • Of music...
  • He’s about to lose it
  • Pain hits his heart like a Cupid
  • He’s torn apart, he’s looking stupid
  • He try’s to produce his music, he’s going to quick,
  • and skips some part, that rips the track apart, and leaves it in ruin,
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  • He gets a call, they want him! He gets cued in
  • He’s been stuck to this dream like a glue stick,
  • It his arrival on the scene, the views in, he is no longer feeling useless
  • He remembers
  • The day he used to pray
  • To a god who was supposed to make things okay
  • He realizes it was himself who brought him to this day
  • It took a effort, to put up what people say
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  • He looks back and laughs, at the old tracks, realizing the improvement,
  • and how he used to be pretty bad, he’s glad

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