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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Verse One Starts at 0:23
- So a young baby came out crying just like a bitch
- Was he held by mom or dad, he never knew which
- Let's skip a couple ages how bout we go to six
- Where he was, fed from the fridge and spanked by a switch
- He never knew better, didn't always tell the truth
- Got beat everytime his father got involved in booze
- Everday he felt blue, just like the huge bruise
- That he got on his face, after his father blew a fuse
- At the age of seven he was bullied just for being different
- But no matter the consequence he always was determined
- He was talked down by family, was considered a vermit
- Stupid, retarded, dumb any thing that was like ignorant
- He still kept his head up no matter the problem
- Besides he was just a kid, he didn't know how to solve em
- He still considered that his life was awesome
- Even if his dad told him he should've used a condom
- His dad went on and left, told Aj that he was better alone
- But aj didn't undestand why he didn't need a daddy at home
- His mom begged and pleaded but dad made up his mind
- He said he didn't want anything to do with Aj, he didn't have the time
- Let's skip to high school where things gets interesting
- Aj becomes a problematic boy, in school he stops listening
- To what the teachers taught, to him school was sickening
- He was more worried about given this girl a diamond ring
- But poor Aj didn't have a job, so all he could afford was a necklace
- But to the girl she thought that it was the best gift
- But after the death of their child, she went on and left him
- She broke his mother fucking heart, after she said she wouldn't leave him
- So Aj became Suicidal, he started to cut his wrists
- So he went to the hospital just because of it
- Even in there, he felt he would never be shit
- He felt like he would always be different from the other kids.
- Then days after this event his mom went up and died
- Now this would be the first time that Aj has ever cried
- Over someone he loved, he felt like he didn't try
- To save his mother, yeah he felt he didn't even try
- Next up on the list came a suicide attempt
- But Aj couldn't go through with it, he felt like he needed to repent
- And ask the Lord God, to help him fucking vent
- Out all of the emotions, he didn't have the strength
- Then by the grace of God his father took him back
- Told Aj that is was empathy that he lacked
- But Aj didn't want any of that fucking bullshit
- He told his dad that it was his fault and he should just quit
- This is the story of boy who put a gun to his head
- Told himself that he'd be better off dead
- He had the gun pointed straight at his head, point blank range
- But the happy thing about this story is that it doesn't end with a bang
DEFENDER'S RAP
- This is my verses from Intentional Homcide Unintentionally, FT. Lucius
- //Verse 1//
- Is it considered manslaughter? i killed someone's granddaughter,
- Can i go back in time? Can i have a time transporter?
- It was all recorded in a minute on a camcorder,
- It was self defense, i swear, but i put a knife in her chest,
- I did it inreluctantly, as if it were my first quest,
- I left her on the ground, to, in the dirt, rest,
- Then i turned west, i ran, 'cuz i'm not earnest,
- I heard the sirens, but by then i was already writin',
- I saw blue and red enlighten on the horzion,
- signified sirens, roaring like a lion,
- I'm frightened, but i keep my pens,
- writin', as if i'll feel i'll cleanse,
- If you think i'm far from sorry, i'm not, please,
- accept my apology, cuz my hand's on a glock, squeezed,
- I just want ease, but from now, killing, i'll be on sprees,
- Just watch me, i am not free, if they find me, they will lock me! (Up...)
- //Hook//
- It's a homicide, i will fall and hide,
- with a glock beside, dude i promise i'd,
- rather not decide, but i'm chronic eyed,
- watching time drop by, while my thoughts collide,
- Intentional Homicide Unintentionally,
- I'll get the illest penalty, i am unprepared mentally,
- it potentially, could lead to prison penalty.
- //Verse 2//
- Looking back at what i did, i never was a hostile kid,
- guess i must've lost my lid, guess i lost one eyelid,
- and killed all blinded, I didn't want this to be my future,
- never wanted to be a shooter, but a rhyming computer,
- Didn't mean to stab her, but the laughter, continues like some fuckin' chatter,
- (Hahaha!) Go away, voices please! Please do not poison me,
- you make me fall like joint disease, i'll never go back on the choices he's,
- made, but i'm slipping like oil sicked seas, but the point is these,
- voices will not leave my presence, all this shit really does get tense,
- yet sense, the time i killed i feel an essence,
- the expense, for killing her wasn't worth it, please end this,
- //Hook//
- It's a homicide, i will fall and hide,
- with a glock beside, dude i promise i'd,
- rather not decide, but i'm chronic eyed,
- watching time drop by, while my thoughts collide,
- Intentional Homicide Unintentionally,
- I'll get the illest penalty, i am unprepared mentally,
- it potentially, could lead to prison penalty.