Battles Duhlema vs Noun98
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- New era prolific scarer
- no face to match the picture
- drop some psycobilin-wait unti it hit ya
- bowling alley lanes im the ball
- life the pins
- death inevitable maybe im on call
- quote so realistic my mind futuristic
- lucid or trippin ive had so many visions
- cyphering all these hyrogliphics
- i wanted to slap you but god said chill
- zero gravity-your ass- you lose feel
- out of this atmoshere ive been there
- cause frequent pain like a cavity
- lurkin in space blasphamy
- inception tension sedative repetitive
- intelligent anatomy ask the bigger questions like why are we
- praying on my knees -got that medatative
- seen the profusive illusive demented dimensions
- missery loves company- suicidal tendencies
- a ballad of pain building character
- opposite of sinister
- reverse the revolver you see what i see
- i am my own worst fear , im fearing the enemy
- gentleman by day
- philosopher by night
- pervert by choice
- and rebel by fate
- rather spread love than hate
- lost with a new perspectie i took the time and now i respect it
- let the air clear]
- journeys to the future, solipsism,
- fuck the world im being my own solar system
- feed off criticism God gave me a gift a mortal through the time portal
- tore up physics logistics my mind is sharp
- bouncing around in this psycadelic time warp
- circling clocks around me numbing my personality
- dont care about an ego my minds got too much velocity
- out of debt would be nice instead of financial neglect
- never a mooch to much self respect
- my own worst critic, to make it in life i hold immense experience
- im throwin bricks
- me myself an i is my one true click
- fuck sex to get off id rob a bank and everyone id shank
- what goes around comes around so be it
- it is what it is
- these arent just lyrics i dont need reassurance
- i aint a hypocrite
- when it all goes down catch me smiling in a good mood
- doing everything i thought i could do
- so much persistence- my existence
- a persons whos persistnent perserverance
- before im gone all this negativity i will diminish
- infinite adherance
DEFENDER'S RAP
- wanting to run away from reality to the abdominal cavity
- figuring how to transcript one's mind with a logic sanity
- he fell off from the top like a fallen angel because he's parents died
- a light went aside from him and darkness allowed itself to manifest
- ''He'' started drinking, going to strip clubs broke vows he made to his wife
- not once did he try do a suicide to sleep with death but it happen twice
- so much in his mind he cant focus on one thing at a time he was going bitterly insane
- short tempered, at one stage he would abuse his wife so their marriage was in vain
- he had 1 son and verbally abused him to the point the son ran away from''home''
- Heavily addicted to heroine had an overdose and his mouth posed out foam
- at the brink of death he cried out to God ''why?'' give me one more chance
- as death was holding' onto his soul the ''light'' came to sight
- he grabbed hold of it and stood up in astonishment that he was saved
- Darkness was moved aside and failed to reconcile with its home it was shamed
- started looking for his son and found him on roadside and cried out bitterly
- he said '' never will i treat you inferior again'' and his son hugged him with brutal injuries
- then they both went to the mall to get their mom a card of a apology
- headed home his son ran to his mom in excitement and hugged her strongly
- the father went and knelt down and said can you find it in your heart to forgive me
- i'll be a different man if only you give me a ''2nd chance'' then you'll see
- a happy ending for the family (R.I.P Mandela)