Battles  JC-Broken_Lost- vs RAY

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • It was yesterday that you left,
  • But it feels like you have been gone forever,
  • The pain I feel the sadness that’s coming
  • threw it just won’t go away and stop showing I
  • miss you I enjoyed being with you but you up
  • and left and it left me broken and alone again I
  • can see and feel the good feelings flying away
  • an all the Bright colours I see are fading away
  • the world I see is turning Grey I don’t see a
  • tomorrow anymore I’m scared so I lock my
  • doors I cry every night and punch the walls I
  • scream in pain and I’ve start hurting the
  • people I care about I’m re living in vain and I
  • forgot who I am an I don’t know who I’ll
  • become I’ve got so many questions like we’re
  • did all my happiness go? Why am I like this
  • again? We’re are you? Why did you leave me?
  • Was I not good enough? That’s all the
  • questions the people in my head keep asking
  • me and I never have a reply I just feel like I
  • wanna die but I’m already dead inside so why
  • should I go threw the trouble of dying when I
  • already don’t feel alive I may survive for now
  • but I don’t see the point of living i’m lost and In
  • the worst pain I’m not the same and I’m taking
  • all the blame I see I bright flame I want to use
  • it too take away all the pain you were my flame
  • but your gone so a real flame is going to take
  • your place to ease the pain in my torn souls
  • body forever dead inside & broken.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I am too scared to dream
  • From when I was eleven to eighteen
  • To make my voice heard
  • They told me that passion is absurd
  • This is as good as life gets
  • Yet my life is such a mess
  • I listened to those jerks
  • Who only told me the worst
  • They say I didn't have the power
  • Had no money
  • They were bitter
  • Looked in the fucking mirror
  • They say my hair ain't the right colour
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  • One day I will break free
  • No more apologies
  • I will listen to myself
  • I will just forget the rest
  • It’s gonna be a long ride
  • I just gotta hold on tight
  • This is my chance
  • My wild comeback
  • I may seem alone
  • My path is unknown
  • I just know is that I don’t wanna go back home

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