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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • All these slim jims slipping to the gym, skimming the milk and sleeping in silk.
  • I’m sweeping their feet off the carpet, these starlets screeching like harpies
  • but at heart they’re harmless.
  • Charmed, I’m sure but you won’t endure
  • so I forgot your name when you walked out the door.
  • Core strength is more work at the core
  • but I swore I’d floor ’em and encourage an encore
  • from the chorus.
  • I am Odysseus on a journey, you’re Paris on a gurney.
  • Time is churning on, more to learn, tables to turn,
  • haters to burn, bribes to spurn, energy returns.
  • The yearning is the way of waiting but I
  • keep pushing myself without prying eyes,
  • this is body weight exercise.
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  • Calisthenics, if the call is then this rhythm is pushing me now.
  • I kow-tow to none. I’m Icarus, I fly to the sun,
  • but I fashioned wings from these broken dreams
  • and with strings forged from forms unknown to my foes
  • cause they were birthed out of flame, hunger for fame
  • and shot out of shame I refuse to feel again.
  • I’m reusing a fuse and confusing the few
  • on cruise control as I barrel roll through the whole of them
  • and blow away their masquerade with my holy hand grenade.
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  • Masks off, were raiding like vikings and raining on their parade
  • the little tykes who decided to side against me
  • won’t make it to the new light or delight in this lighter load.
  • I’m goaded on by GOATs long gone and my God
  • is greater than any other love I’m layered with
  • but my song is for a longer,stronger… it’s honor I’m obsessed with.
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  • This stress anchored to my chest is nothing less than longing
  • to see the day my destiny comes calling.
  • So while the sun is falling and the shadows getting bigger,
  • I’ll be lifting weights and working on my figure.
  • Picture perfect is perched upon my shoulder,
  • creeping by further as I get a little older.
  • I soldier on with a folder full of woe-be-gone.
  • If you got self-pity than I got a shelf sitting thick with trophies
  • and you can drop your ego at the door
  • cause here the only score
  • that counts is the punch you pack per ounce.
  • Back off from me cause the numbers won’t add up when you
  • stack the tactics, attacks, or racks
  • of lacking intelligence, diligence or eloquence,
  • at the steps of my fence.
  • Let me just state the confidence I have
  • you won’t be able to handle this when I am going off strong,
  • like Handel’s Messiah to the Birthday song.
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  • I might still be adolescent, but you be prepubescent
  • and I’ll upend you without exception
  • since you came at me with out the protection
  • of respect or even brief reflection.
  • My meter and cadence is beating you back to front
  • and I’ll greet you, beat you back at the front,
  • battering you bluntly with nobody bad enough to hunt me down
  • and remove the crown you can’t sound these depths of sound
  • and slam dunks of syllables,
  • La Cucaracha, I’m un-killable.
  • Meet me at the line I’m a menace,
  • you might call me Dennis
  • and I penned this with nothing but ten cents and a tendency
  • to be a little bit reckless.
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  • Rent this out to the ones who need to breathe with fire
  • instead of their airways getting tighter.
  • I’m an inhaler to those inhibited by insecurities
  • I’m here to be a surety for those still hearing these relentless rhythms
  • and hymns written for him and her.
  • Keep looking through till you find the words you choose to use
  • then light your own fuse.
  • We march in twos and threes.
  • We seize our opportunities and unfreeze the fearful frequently.
  • Our fees are free and our feet fly to the sky with speed,
  • seeking to sweep these shells from the street.
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  • Now they’re calling the paramedics cause I brutalized this beat.
  • I was an apprentice at the poetic printers
  • now I’m flipping the alphabet athletically;
  • I’m a sprinter, and drifting rhythm right poetically.
  • Reaching for rhyme in three quarter time
  • and coming up fine with each line, unforgettably.
  • I’m a forge for words. I am a smithy smitten
  • with the words the world has written
  • and climbing so high on every hidden lyric there is to listen to,
  • it’s an incomplete appendix.
  • But I will study them every second as I perfect my own genetics.
  • Pushing myself every day as I raise my own bar.
  • Calisthenics.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • A feeling of Antecedent
  • Something to Cultivate the Seeds of Hate
  • Grown into A Fresh Plate of Repugnance
  • Malignity in Abundance
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  • Au Revoir Fair Angel
  • Au Revoir Rest the weary Valkyrie //
  • A Desert with a Tinge of Petrichor
  • O Alke Grant me strength a persisting battle Rages
  • Through the Shifting Sands of the hourglass as the time changes
  • A Castle in the air a situation of Vigary
  • A phantasmal phenomenon as souls
  • Crush my own élan vital in Dominion
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  • Au Revoir Fair Angel
  • Au Revoir Rest the weary Valkyrie //
  • Soldiers buried in the Charnel House
  • Lifes many ups and downs like a Merry go Round
  • Like a book we´re bound to a Spirit
  • Ah élan vital An Iron Fist to Paramount
  • A Bar in Preponderant Girth
  • A Malevolent Spirit Weighed
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  • A Tribulation ...Played out through Life

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