Battles PJR vs
RULES
Heartbreak. Can record if you want to mine aint though. Can be free verse too doesn't have to be over anything. Just wanna hear cold bars.
Max of 64 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- i just wanted to see how you was doing
- i just wanna ask a question
- have i been in your mind like you have been in mine?
- do you still think about it i doubt it thats why im asking
- no not a bad thing maybe im just stuck
- maybe you meant way more to me than i ever did to you
- and if this is true i suppose thats some type of closure
- cause then i learn the truth and i got closer to myself
- cause since you left i aint known no else
- i aint known what love felt like
- no colour all grey black and white
- and thats not your fault no its mine
- so dont feel the need to apologise
- for me being locked in my mind
- clocks aint ticking no there aint no time
- its just me and you
- how i seen my future it was my view
- but now your out the picture i cant see nothing new
- i just been locked away
- i just been poppin strips
- trying replicate the feelings that i used to get
- lying beside you in your bed
- that time you made me breakfast for my birthday
- even you know thats the worst day for me
- cause i feel like theres no one else like you
- i dont know who i am but i think you do
- and thats what made me feel safe
- and i think thats why when you left
- //
- i was broken
- can you imagine fire only frozen cause i ignite when im flowing
- even tho i feel so cold inside and im always smiling tryna hide
- i think about you i hope you know that i wrote this just to show that
- cause im
- twisted as fuck ive sat all day trying not to crack up
- i havent spoken a word just typing letters on a page
- that ill never get to say i might as well just simply erase
- go back a space i wish i could but then i wouldnt have these memories
- i would see emotion in the way i do and paintings that make me think of you
- i felt like you were my gallery but maybe it was just valarie and all the wine
- maybe it was just the drugs thats why i feel like i was never good enough
- cause you could have anyone you want and you chose me
- and that till this day doesnt make sense i still cant comprehend
- maybe thats why i sit and pretend
- maybe thats why these thoughts they never end
- all the messages ive went to send but were never sent
- all the time thinking is money ive spent
- with no one to blame but myself
- so fuck it im done
- and this is it ill finish everything down goes the sun
- cause i know your the one
- im just hoping it aint the right time and somewhere down the line
- we meet again and ill buy bottle like the old times
- but id be crazy thinking that would happen
- so ill just sit here and imagine like i always do
- i think its the only thing that pulls me through
- 64 lines wrote in time all about you
- enjoy my love.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Carry assonance broken operas cause of the judgmental
- carried out enormous flute grinding cigar on the air sac
- flip stock cause this ear pods taste like an out cast about
- to bounce back on the corner remain humiliated till
- lines round it's self on the net and opponent gotta move
- cut boxes insolent phrases adds to my basket
- as an asset to throw on the forest as a bait
- for the culprit on the stomach chasing eggs
- on grandma doors with the shotgun hold in the front lawn
- made it to a symbol stock up every civilian
- isn't it efficient for an ostrich to be beneficial
- for too much respect buried aloft on the head
- grounded in the back tip inch of the skeleton
- scoliosis wrote doctrine for my submission on
- to bad got no emotion to drive the onions on
- Pesticide twisted animal formula
- needed to memorize cause I'm nausea when reading magazine
- having dementia has my guinea pig sway on the wheel
- mad decent guinea pig running scratch pine trying to balance
- a friend on the back with scoliosis giggling with parasitic
- worm on the stomach grinding pesto paste place back at the column
- rhyme pick a back strip to stand up in spiral
- play back to scenario with tumbling verses notorious for asylum
- lookin' like a socket mashed up up till it spindle the scholars
- whistle the vocab cause I'm causing underground pressure
- indifferent overlook so better tell me to design and wrap it tight
- with the formula I squat and recharge for caution use
- to debacle stimulate every number in magic squares
- murderous burnt to cigars stocked pile and squat on the slide
- flying my thought into saucer machine different rhymes I digest